The Princess and the Pea Movie Rewrite

Another page and another round of explaining stuff.
==About the Original Movie==
The original movie was about a raven who needed to uncover the secret of a pea in order to save his kingdom. Babies being switched at birth, a musical number about the mysterious properties of a pea, and a big deal made over a pair of shoes ensues in this movie, and it's filled with holes.
Personally, I want to see if I can fix these holes and add my own twist to things by writing this. Hopefully I do a good job.
==Chapter 1==
((I'm probably going to delete this at some point. Honestly, I don't know where I'm going with this, and I'm not sure that this'll stay when I do.))
"Oh, for goodness sake," Annabelle half-heard her mother saying while still sleeping on the floor. "Wake up, you two good for nothings! WAKE UP!!"
Annabelle woke up with a start, then saw her mother standing over and glaring at her and her sister.
Oh no.
"It's about time you woke up!" Her mother said, kicking her sister, Daria, in the stomach just as she was starting to wake up. "The animals don't take care of themselves, you know!"
Annabelle glared at her mother right back as she helped Daria and herself up.
"If you're so worried about the animals, then why don't you take care of them yourself?" She said.
Her mother snorted.
"You know that taking care of them makes me look worse than my usually beautiful self!" She said, running her fingers through her greasy and messy black hair.
"Beautiful?" Annabelle retorted. "You're about as "beautiful" as I am!"
"Annie-"
"You take that back!" Her mother said, fuming.
"Never-"
"Annie, let's go," Daria said, leading a still glaring Annabelle outside by the arm.
"That's it!" Her mother said, pointing straight at Annabelle. "No dinner for you tonight, missy! And as for you, Daria, you're going to have to work twice as hard in order to make up for your sister and earn your dinner!"
Upon hearing this news, Daria just sighed delicately, as she always did when she dealt with bad news. Annabelle, meanwhile, wanted to punch her mother in the face.
~
Fortunately, it was a sunny day outside, meaning that the two sisters didn't have to do what they had to do in the rain.
As they went to put the slop in the place where the pigs ate, Annabelle noticed one of the pigs racing into Daria's arms as the other two went over to eat their slop.
Annabelle rolled her eyes at this, but really, she was a bit jealous of the animals' affection for Daria. She knew that she should be used to it by now, especially since she had grown up with Daria all her life, but seeing animals just race to Daria like that just put a sour feeling in her stomach.
What attracted them to Daria and not her? They had both been around them all their lives!
...Was there something wrong with Annabelle or something?
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