Fear

This is my first writing here, so I would greatly appreciate some constructive criticism. Thank you!
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Cold shivers running down your back
Blood turns to ice
Veins, frozen rivers
Waiting, suspense, terror
An icicle hanging in the frozen air
A sharp sound escapes your lips
Quiet, then louder, and finally, it's unbearable
The one thing you dread most
Beckons you with a hand full of deathly claws
They tap you on the cheek
Ever so gently
Stroking your neck
Like a statue, you stay still
A perfect, unmoving silhouette
Is cast against the wall
Fingers lace around, delicately rubbing your throat
And then he strikes
Another shriek echoes around the ever-so-dark room
The metallic scent of blood taints the air
There is a long silence
A man offers you his hand.
He is your lover.
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