Unreal Jesse (Rewritten)

(Note: This story was created in an attempt to fix mistakes and clichés that were in the original story and this rewritten version is canon with the main character "Unreal Jesse" and it ignores the original creepypasta itself.)
== Chapter 1 ==
Hello, I'm Ryan Ludwig. I have been a Minecraft player since 2012, It's been a while and nostalgia still exists to this day, Minecraft is a game that holds a place in my heart. I remember when I was playing with my friends, building, crafting, mining, and killing monsters. What beautiful memories. I remembered when my good friends defeated Ender dragon, then Wither boss. I loved those good times and I still love it every time I remember it. But do you think Minecraft is a kids' game? Think about it twice before you download it for your kids. Because everything has its darkest secrets you don't want to mess with.
It was October 15, 2019. I had nothing to do, it was a boring day. I finished watching some Cartoon Network shows. I was thinking what am I going to do on this day? Suddenly an idea came to my mind. A new update has been added to Minecraft, and they have added modifications to the village and villagers, including adding Pillagers. So why not? I opened Minecraft and created my survival world. I remember that seed was 1316668319. So, I spawned somewhere, I started with the beginnings of any typical player, cutting down trees, collecting stones, and killing animals for food. Everything seemed fine when for two days in-game until I came back home and put the irons I had found in the furnace. I went into my bed and slept, I felt like I was in bed for a minute, something was watching me from the window of my house, I caught a glimpse of what he looked like, almost like the character Jesse from Minecraft Story Mode.
However, one strange thing about it is that it has black eyes instead of green and his belt was almost orange rather than red. It used to happen to me while I was sleeping. When I woke up, this thing started running at high speed towards one of the houses in a village next to me, and when I went to the place where this thing went, I couldn't find it. This moment confused me a little as if he disappeared in the blink of an eye. There were no villagers around here. Which makes it even more weird. Since there were no zombies around this time.
Anyway, I went back to sleep, when I woke up. The first I did was miming in the ravine for diamonds. I had some torches to light up the cave, indeed, I found 4 diamonds. I was super happy right now. But it was cut immediately upon when I went out from the tunnel I made. I found no torches there; they were all gone, and a lot of zombies and skeletons were spawned. They tried to kill me but I managed to escape them by building stones up to the surface and using a shield so I could block off the arrows the skeleton was shooting because I have been a player with exceptional Minecraft experience for 7 years. But I was wondering where the hell torches went. I was pretty sure I had already put them.
They were just finished into thin air. All while on my way home. I came across a biome. They were all trees without leaves and pyramids in water. It confused me and I started to doubt whether it was part of a new update or a joke to silence people who believed in Herobrine. In the middle of the area, I found a sign and to be fair I was playing in the single-player world, so I don't think there was a prankster. There was something written on the sign, it was saying in Swedish "Jag tar din själ :)" But I was able to transfer it to British. It was saying "I'll take your soul" I got shivers down my spine when I read this. What does it mean to take my soul? I broke that sign and threw it somewhere. I finally came back home. Once I opened the door, I found all my torches were replaced by redstone torches and redstone dust was spread around the ground of my house. This left me shocked and distraught, I opened my chest, and I hadn't found my stuff instead, there were roses all over my chest. My bed was turned black. There was a sign above my bed. It says, "It seems you don't like the surprise, Ryan Ludwig." How in the world does anything or anyone know my name, unless they have access to my computer name, my computer name is "FunnyGamer55" I didn't even put my last name on my Minecraft account. Then how could that be possible?
I went outside and I found the whole village was set on fire and zombies started spawning with them having iron swords, including skeletons and cave spiders instead of normal spiders. I started running as fast as I could, but they were getting fast each time until at one point, I was dragged into neither. I was standing in a bedrock block that held me above lava when I looked right in front of the direction. I saw it. The same thing that was watching me while I was sleeping from a window. He was floating, as if he was in creative mode and his eyes were now completely red. It started using the chat system. However, oddly enough, the name belonging to the person writing in the chat was not clear but was cursed or glitched. Here are the things it said.
"Look at you, Ryan. I can see you through the screen. I can tell you had some fun."
"But you know. Fun has its end, And the beginning of new fun always began."
"You have no idea how much funny you can be, humans, mortals or whatever I should call you all."
"But sooner or later. Your soul is mine and mine only. So don't try anything stupid. Besides, I doubt you will."
"I know who you are. Everything about you. Everything I know about you. It's under my omniscient mind. Your fate is under my omnipotence."
"Don't ask your beloved God to save you now. Nobody can save you. Not even God."
"I will be the evil that will haunt you through your years. Until I claim your soul. I loved playing this little game with you. But I will come back for you to play again."
This thing lunged at me and hit me, knocking me over to lava and resulting in my death in processes. My game froze and crashed. Then I tried to open my screen and I found out that my world no longer exists in my map list. All of this left me terrified and confused. What is this thing? What does it mean by all this? Why does it want my soul? All the questions filled my brain, and I couldn't answer them. Be warned, once it finds you. You are under his mercy!
== Chapter 2 ==
Hi, it's me again. It's been 5 months since this event, and it left me disturbed for months. I never played Minecraft after this event. I thought it was all over when I decided to open Minecraft again five months after this happened. But now I'm starting to realize that what's going to happen now is something big and disturbing. I created a new world, and I already did. But something unexpected happened, instead of spawning in Overworld, I spawned in Nether, I was surprised, how am I there? Unless I made a portal but I created a world early. So, I start wondering how it is possible. My skin was also lost and pitch-black.
I also noticed that there was a large castle that was made of blocks of nether, it was far from me at least 40 blocks. I stayed silent, not knowing what to say, and instead started walking toward it, I started hearing some whispers, they were deeper and slow-pitched and I couldn't make out what they were saying. As if those whispers speaking in a different language. Once I stepped into this castle, I saw it had torches that weren't featured in Minecraft 1.14, they were bright orange rather than typical ones. I start wandering around and the whispers start getting more intense and weirder as I continue wandering around until the whispers stop and turn around to see that bunch of wither skeletons running towards me, but they have diamond armour, I start running as fast as I could as they were pretty faster than their speed. I went to the roof and closed the door behind me.
As I closed it and turned behind me, I saw something, this thing resembled Jesse again, but it was staring at the sky and it seemed it didn't notice me at all, I hesitated at first whether I should approach him or not, and I wish I hadn't, when I started to approach this thing and it turned towards me. It had a sinister smile on its face, I tried to run and do anything, but I couldn't move even when I started moving the mouse to make a move, it started to walk slowly towards me, and I felt my blood become cold as it stopped in its trace away from me 10 blocks. I could tell I was so scared right now, and I didn't know what to do next, it then pulled out an iron sword and sent something into the chat.
"It's been a while, Ryan. We can play together forever. Just like others. Once I'm done with you. I will make your worst, deadly nightmares come true. You delight me with the terror on your face, my friend." It then lunges at me while lightning bolts start striking me and the game freezes before the computer gives me a death-blue screen, but something is off about it, instead of the usual frown it has a smile, and at the end of the message from death blue screen "Time continues, friend :)" The computer turned off on it's on accord. I start now questioning what the fuck happened, what was it all about? I have no logical explanation for what was that but I'm pretty sure it isn't some joke made up by Mojang. Be careful, it may be out there somewhere. It is watching you.
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