The Magical Girl Gazes Back - My Version

My idea is a plot based on this animated short, in my version the magical girl with purple hair is called Pretty Star and is the alter ego of a boy called Victor. And the plot starts with his girlfriend Lily discovering this.
* The plot begins with the characters at school, when a mysterious character invades the place and attaches an object to a student, the object turns the girl into a dark magical girl who begins to attack the school. Victor is immediately pulled to safety by his girlfriend. The place is a small, empty room that has no windows. Victor checks the place out and notices that there are no windows in the room, and says worriedly that there is no way out of this room through a window. Lily finds the sentence strange, and asks why he would want to go out through a window, and then he tells Lily to get out of the door because he has to. But she says that she has someone out there preying on everyone and asks why he wants to leave. And he says he wants out because he has someone out there attacking everyone, she doesn't understand the phrase. And he says he needs to go out to help the people, but she stops him asking "And what help are you going to give? You're just going to be attacked". He gives up talking and decides to transform in front of her, and shouts "Pretty Henshin", and then transforms into Pretty Star. Lily goes into shock and he says he hoped she never saw him like this and then she starts looking at Pretty Star's body and she tries to ask a question but starts to stutter. Pretty Star tries to leave, but Lily stops her and asks "What do you mean you're Pretty Star? Do you have any idea how many students from this school kiss Pretty Star's pictures and want to date her, one of them already said he wants to marry her" . And he said "And you think I like to hear that?", and then he left the room and hit the enemy with a glitter laser, and then he said "I am a warrior and I fight for love and justice, I am Pretty Star ". And Lily seeing it all said that she never thought she would hear her boyfriend say that. And then Pretty Star starts to fight against the dark magical girl, she tries to shoot Pretty Star, but Pretty Star blocks it with a force field. And then the dark magical girl, keeps trying to hit her, while she dodges, but then Pretty Star hits her with a glitter laser and that destroys the object that turned her into a dark magical girl, reverting the girl to normal. Pretty Star is applauded, but then she teleports out of there. Then Lily notices a flash of light behind her, she looks over and sees Pretty Star inside that room changing back to Victor. She enters the room and tries to say something irritated, but then she hesitates and just says "You owe me an explanation".
*This episode starts with Lily saying "So let me get this straight. You've turned into a girl because the idea was that these powers were for a woman". Victor said that the woman was his sister, but she ended up in a hospital, and he had to take the powers that were hers. And she asked what's going on anyway, and Victor said that several brooches that would turn people into magical girls or boys were stolen and altered to create villains. Only one was left and the idea was to give it to his sister, but because of what happened, he had to use it. She complains that he should have told her this sooner, and points out that when they started dating they promised they wouldn't lie to each other. He tries to explain himself, but she doesn't accept it and tries to leave, but then he stands in front of her and asks if she would like him to say that he keeps turning into a girl. She tried to say something, but then thought and admitted that she wasn't going to like hearing that. But that still she thinks he should have said. And she left, he followed her asking her to forgive him. And she told him not to follow her. But then she goes to talk to a friend who was playing tennis, and then the same mysterious character appears and gives the guy a pin just like the one before. At the same time he gets a sinister appearance, and makes a fireball appear and throws it with the racket. She manages to escape this ball and the next ones, but then he makes her go inside a giant tennis ball and makes the ball hit the ground several times. The ball disappears and she is injured, the character makes a new fireball appear, but before using it, he is hit by a laser. And it was Pretty Star who fired that laser, and immediately a fight ensues. He sends out several fireballs, but Pretty Star makes a force field to protect herself. But he raises his hand and thousands of fireballs fall on top of Pretty Star, and the force field is destroyed. Now the villain makes a big fireball appear and when he tries to hit it with the racket, Lily starts to insult him and make fun of him, irritated he changes the position of the fireball so he can use it on her. But Pretty Star draws a heart in the air (with the wand) and it turns into an attack on him, he is defeated and the brooch breaks. Pretty Star says "It's like they say love hurts". He returns to normal, goes to Lily and says "Especially when it's my love for you". And then he helps her up and takes her to a hospital. But before she was taken into the living room, she asked for a moment to do something, and then she kissed Victor on the cheek and said "Thank you".
*This episode starts after Lily has returned to the hospital, Victor is waiting for her and asks if she has forgiven him and they can go back to being lovers. And she said "I forgave you, but I don't know if we can still be lovers". He asks why, and she says that she doesn't like girls, but he points out that he's not a girl, but then she reminds him that when he's Pretty Star he's a girl. He starts defending himself that it's just for the time and that he doesn't stay like that all the time, but she said that this is very strange for her. And he comments that it was pretty weird for him the day it first happened. She tries to say something, but he starts to look back, and then he starts to run in some direction. And then he sees a girl, Lily followed him and asked what the problem was, and then asked if this isn't Susan, his minecraft fan friend. And he says he has a strange feeling. And then he says "Pretty Henshin", and transforms, and runs into an alley next to Susan and sees something disappearing. He says that Susan will be the next target and that she is being followed. Lily asks what he's going to do, he says "I'll keep following her, and you'll leave". But then he realizes he lost sight of Susan, and asks her to borrow his cell phone, and says he needs to know where she is to help her, she asks if he knows the phone number. And he realizes that he doesn't know. Then he feels something again and says that unfortunately he already found out where she is, Lily runs after him asking why he said "Unfortunately". And then they see Susan being transformed into a villainous Dark Magical Girl with a dress full of cubes. Pretty Star only cares about hitting the mystery man causing it, but her shot is stopped by a Minecraft-like barrier the villainess has made. The villain disappears after that and leaves them with the Dark Magical Girl, who makes a bunch of little Minecraft monsters to attack them. Pretty Star destroys most of them with her wand shots, but then the dark magical girl starts creating a huge Minecraft ball. She throws at them, but Pretty Star holds it, the girl keeps pushing with her mind to push the ball over them, and Pretty Star keeps pushing to hold the ball in place, the ball starts to move forward. Lily asks if he can't get rid of it, and he says it would need more energy, Lily has a flashback to Victor talking about the strong theme of the power of love that her power has. And then she hugs Pretty Star and says she changed her mind and wants to stay her girlfriend, and then Pretty Star manages to throw the ball at Dark Magical Girl, and then they see her slammed against the wall. The Minecraft ball falls and it is shown that the brooch has broken and then everything disappears and she is back to normal. After that Victor asks if she was serious about that, and she replies that not at first, but she has already decided that she wants to continue being his girlfriend.
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