Sparky & Gloom(2006)

That's the name of an animated short that didn't work with the public and that's why it didn't become an animated series. I am presenting the changes that I think the story would have to have to work, which include, Sparky and Gloom not being twins and the story taking more time to make the joke of the reverse situation, and my idea would be not to have something like "an evil witch", the plot would be more "different worlds", so Gloom and her mother would not be evil.
* The story begins with the wedding scene, Prince Charming is the groom, and all the guests are waiting for the bride to arrive. Then a witch flies up on her broomstick and lands there, everyone looks at her, and the witch apologizes for being late and then changes her outfit into a wedding dress, and makes a bouquet appear. And the wedding takes place with this witch being the bride, and when the wedding ends it is shown that her daughter Gloom is very uncomfortable with the wedding and she leaves there mumbling about it. But the person sitting next to her, Sparky walks up to her and asks what the problem is. The Gloom says that she was rooting for her mother to give up on the marriage and asks where have you ever seen a fairytale witch marry a fairytale prince. Sparky admits that this is pretty weird, but asks if it doesn't sound nice that she can say that she now has a prince for a father. Gloom looks like he's going to say something, but then asks "Wait a minute, but if he's going to be my new dad then you're going to be...". And Sparky says "Hug me sis", and hugs Gloom who starts screaming "NOOOOOOOOO!". The scene advances to the prince's castle where the Gloom's mother is showing her her new room that she will share with Sparky. And she says angrily that she doesn't want to have to share her room with Sparky. Then Sparky appears in the doorway with the licorice pot and says "Gloom, I brought red licorice as a welcome gift to my room. I know some people prefer black licorice, but...". And then Gloom makes the door close in her face, the same way Gloom's mom makes the door open and Sparky says "I should have brought black licorice". When she enters, Gloom's mother, and Gloom asks what spell Sparky's father used to win over her mother, but Spary counters the sentence by saying that it would make more sense for Gloom's mother to have used a spell to win the prince. Gloom says he still can't understand what happened and Sparky says that love can't be explained, and starts to be optimistic about their life together as sisters, and Gloom says that she doesn't want to be Sparky's sister. The scene advances to the school where Sparky is going to participate in a dance class and tries to convince Gloom to participate. When she asks Sparky why, she says that her father is having a ball at the castle and that they better take the opportunity to start learning to dance, pointing out that it is best not to embarrass her father at the ball. Gloom says she won't go because she won't attend the dance, but then she stands at the door and when it's time for Sparky to learn to dance, Gloom casts a spell on her shoes that makes Sparky completely flustered, someone points out that the shoes hers are shining. She removes them, but now classes are over. When a student wonders what happened to her shoes, Gloom tells him that she did it. He asks why she did that, and she says that it's not weird for her to pull pranks, but he points out that it wasn't a simple prank because Sparky told Gloom that she didn't want to embarrass her dad at prom. She doesn't mind the phrase, but he asks why the Gloom did it and asks if Sparky did something for her. And she says she doesn't want to be associated with Sparky because Sparky has nothing to do with her, and he asks if she couldn't at least try to get along with her, but she yells "No". At home, Sparky was upset about the mysterious thing that happened to her shoes because it prevented her from learning to dance. Gloom is unfazed by this and even mocks that since Sparky isn't a witch she can't solve her problems with magic like she can. After she leaves, Sparky decides to look for a solution in Gloom's magic book, she looks at the book's glossary and sees which is the page that talks about dancing, and sees a spell where it says "great for a hall with many people ". She writes the spell down on paper and intends to use it at the ball. At the ball, when it's dance time, Sparky casts the spell, but then everyone freezes but her. She doesn't understand anything, but then she remembers that the Gloom wasn't in the hall but in the bedroom and goes to her to ask for help. The two come to the hall and the Gloom asks what happened anyway, and Sparky says that she took a dance spell from her book and doesn't understand how it all went wrong; and then she starts crying saying it's all her fault and she just wanted her dad to be proud of her. The Gloom immediately has a flashback where she burned down the house and her mother scolded her for doing a spell without consulting her, and the Gloom cried saying that she just wanted to become a witch soon so her mother could be proud of her. And then Gloom went to Sparky and told her not to cry because it wasn't her fault, and gave two reasons why it wasn't Sparky's fault. The first reason was because her book was not done correctly, the glossary is wrong, that page is not about dancing spells but about freezing spells. And the second reason was because she bewitched her shoes to sabotage the dance class. When she asked why Gloom did this, she said that she was still irritated by the idea of having to be her new sister and that's why she did this to her. But now she's already sorry and said she shouldn't have done that because Sparky only thought about pleasing her father, just like she only cared about pleasing her mother for a long time. And ran after her magic book, when she said a spell, Sparky immediately started dancing properly, when she wonders this, Gloom says "I owed you a dance lesson, sister", and Sparky perked up that she called her sister. And then the Gloom unfreezes everyone, no one realizes what happened, and the moment when Sparky was going to dance with her father and her new mother starts again. Then he leaves Sparky dancing with her mother, and goes to Gloom (who was leaving the room) and asks if she doesn't want to dance, and she said she won't dance, he tries to convince her to come dance. Then she says "I always made fun of the idea that the prince could convince people with her charm alone. I was wrong", and then she uses the spell on herself and starts dancing. And then when Gloom and Sparky got closer to each other, Gloom said "If you must know, I never thought I would do this". And Sparky said "So we're even. Because I never thought I'd touch a witch's book either."
Category:Fan Fictions