Challenge 3

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Words: Shame, night, bird, bright, Salvation
==1st position: Chiron66 (Caleb) with 4 upvotes==
I used to be a bird 
Flying through the night 
I used to fly so high
I used to be so bright
But then I met you
And we flew
Across the sky
That’s when my heart died
When you left the sky
Your life
Shining bright
Lightning strike
You hit the ground
Thunder sounds
In my ears
And I fell with you
Didn’t die
No lightning strike
But I joined you
Lying on the ground 
I feel so ashamed 
Because I couldn’t save
Couldn’t save your life
I watched the lightning strike
And now this is the last time
That I’ll see your face
Sad smiles
Final laughs
Goodbye now
My greatest friend
Salvation
Where are you?
Where’s my happy end
Lying in the sand
Sand turned to glass
From the lightning strike
That ended your flight
And my heart lost it’s life
And I say goodbye
I’m still crying
My heart is dying
Long live the love of my life
I remember you every time
The lightning strikes
==2nd position: SassyGhostQueen101 with 1 upvotes==
Shame burns bright,
Clear in the night,
No one can save me,
If this is what I am to be.
Salvation is impossible,
Hope is improbable,
Death must be near,
I'm not meant to be here.
The scars of a life-taker,
The eyes of a dream-breaker,
A dead soul walking,
A broken voice talking.
A bird flies by,
Its time to say goodbye,
The man I loved and I killed,
His purpose, as my victim, now fulfilled
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