Welcome To My Dimension

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My fourth story! I hope you enjoy! Disclaimer: This story is not real.
I went to the End with my sister Jen in Minecraft. I gave her my Iron armor and a pumpkin. I wore Diamond armor and pumpkin too. 
Then we saw a sign and went toward it. The sign wrote: Welcome to my dimension. Succeed then you may leave freely. If you fail check your mom's body. Go north.
We didn't know how he will hurt our mom but decided safe than sorry. We went north until we saw another sign. This time it wrote: East now!
We went east quickly until we saw a cute girl in the End? Is this the person that have been putting the signs? Then when she turned around she had eyes of HEROBRINE! We were scared out of our minds. My sister fainted but not before screaming. 
"If you don't want your mom to die, follow me. And only you, boy." She said.
I nodded as I followed her. I saw all the Endermans captured. 
"Kill them all now!" She yelled.
I didn't want to kill those poor Endermans because if I did, Endermans will not exist in Minecraft anymore. Notch made an update that there will be no more Enderman spawners and they have to breed. I killed them... you might think I'm a monster, but I'm not. Will you like Minecraft with no more Enderman and Enderman loot or your mom dead? For me, I will choose the first option.
"Now for the final, ocelots." She spoke
I'm sure there are no more ocelot spawners in the Overworld. I killed them... Their shriek and the thought of ocelots will forever haunt my dreams. 
"You may leave now," She said softly, not affected by those poor mobs die. When I left it was bedtime and I kept dreaming of me killing the ocelots and keep waking up. Since then I have quit Minecraft for the greater good.
THE END
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