DoveHeart's Saga

Authors note: This might take awhile to finish, and this is my first story, but shhhhhhhh. also, gimme some names for kitties, plz. You may suggest an oc, but please include the following: Name~Gender~Personality~Rank (Not Guru) Description and picture if possible. IF you submit an oc, you give me permission to do whatever I want, and may not complain if I turn a kind cat evil or vise versa.(I'm new, so if anything I do is against the rules and i didn't catch it, could you let me know?) Tanks, DoveHart. 
Alligences:
Cats of the Red Cliffs:
Pharoh (Leader) Nai-A brown she with light brown spots on her back, and a white tail tip, with light green chips of ice as eyes.
Aristic (Deputy):Eagle-A sleek white she with brown splotches and hazel eyes.
Guru(Medicine cat):N/A- The previous was, well, no spoilers..
Body(Warriors):
Falcon- A dark brown tom with white patches on his left ear, mid tail, and back right paw. He has Hazel eyes.
Leone- An abnormally almost yellow tom, with a brown tuft at his neck. He has bright green eyes.
Aster- a she with a light brown coat and light brown spots. She has blue eyes
Haven- A fluffy, white, elegant she with beautiful blue eyes
Fir- A dark brown tom with lemon yellow eyes
Neve- an albino she with reddish pink eyes
Resa- a pale brown she with white spots. She has hazel eyes
Learners:
Poen- a white she with light brown spots
Caretakers:
Makr- looking for desc. suggestions
Kittens:
Macka- a ginger tom with yellow eyes
Kittypets
Goldie- a white and light gray she with yellow eyes
Creame- a white, light and dark gray she with mint green eyes
Prolouge
"She won't make it."
"I know she will!"
"Laurel!"
"Nobody can help her.."
"What should we do?"
"Laurel."
"..."
"Laurel?"
"Laurel!"
Chapter 1
Creame awoke, blinking in the bright sun. She would climb out of her bed and to her bowl expectantly. The door would open and she would wander into her yard. "I really love this place." She would talk to herself.
"I wouldn't trade my life here for anything." She turns, seeing her sister, Goldie.
"Oh hey!" Cream spoke, her tail slowly moving back and forth.
"How are the housefolk? They been much trouble?" Goldies bright gray and white tail would flicker back and forth quickly.
"No, not much. They do keep barking when I take out my claws though. I told them not to, but they won't stop."
"Mine used to, but they stopped after awhile. It's just a phase."
"Alright."
"Did you hear about the cliff cats? What they did to Falake?"
"No, what happened?"
"Snow told me they ate him!"
"Poor Falake.."
"I feel really bad for snow.. She loved him.." Goldie looked down, head and tail drooping. "Anyhow, I gotta go."
"Cya Goldie.." As Goldie left, she thought a bit about the cliff cats. Why would they hurt poor, innocent Falake?
Creame would walk inside, eating her food. She had eaten mice before, and they were better, but she got this every day, so she was fine with it. She looked over at her housefolk, jumping on the counter.
Her housefolk would pick her up, putting her in the small, enclosed, nest."Hey!" She would cry in rebellion, hissing. She never liked it, because she would sit in here, blazing hot for hours at a time. Sometimes she would get taken far away to a place where they would poke and stab her with needles, others Creame would be taken to a lake with stone beaches and unnatural smells and many other housefolk, many times mainly kittens. She lied in the darkness for hours.
Chapter 2
She growls as they mess with her paws. "Be do bop be do, me maw de daw." They talked, her housefolk nodding as the white coated one spoke.This time she had been taken to get poked and stabbed. Goldie had told her it would keep her healthy, but how could pain be good for you?
"It just is." she had told her after her last poking session. Suddenly, Creame felt a pain, then she felt very tired. She closed her eyes, falling asleep.
Creame woke up, her paws panging with pain. Something was wrong. She tried unsheathing her claws, but they wouldn't go out. "Housefolk?" She asked, her housefolk pushing her away as she gave green stuff to the white coat, putting her in the nest. "What did you do?!" She screeched, hissing. then, darkness for hours on end.
A/N: Sorry for the short chapter, it's to help the flow.
Chapter 3
She awoke back in her nest. Her claws were still not working. It was the bright light of morning, so she went to speak with her sister about this mess. It was difficult getting up the fence due to her claw-less paws.
"Creame!" Goldie called out. 
"Hey Goldie I have something to s-"
"Cliff cats took Snow!"
"What? Okay, but this is impor-"
"I heard her scream as this dark cat, he was so scary, attacked her and took her! They probably-"
"Goldie!" She took a moment to breathe, Goldie standing silently. "My twolegs took my claws out, or something. They aren't working."
"So you're a soft-paw now..?"
"Is that what they did? Because I can't stand it." Creame said with a minor hint of disgust in her voice.
"The last cat I knew who went soft-paw had terrible owners. She died a few months after they stole her claws."
"So I have to leave."
"I guess, but you can't come to my place. My twolegs would know."
"Then I'll go to the cliffs." Cream said with determination.
"What?!" Goldie screeched in shock. "There are murderous cats, I can't let you-"
"I feel it," Creame murmured. "I feel something, maybe destiny or fate, pulling me there."
"It's your choice, but don't die, or else I'll kill you!" Goldie said.
"I'll be safe. I just need my mousie."
"Heh. You always loved that thing.." Goldie said nostalgicly.
"Meet me here tomorrow at noon."
"Will do." Goldie bounded off.
Chapter 4
To be continued
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