Spooky Scary Fantendo Showcase 2016/Presentations/PlayRight Games Inc./Double Deck

DAY 4
 
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==Double Deck==
Before I start, did any of you choose a card from my preview? If you did, great, keep reading. If you didn't, go ahead and pick one now.
 
Trust me, this will be important further down.
One of the coolest things on Fantendo is seeing projects develop over time, watching newer users starting on the road to greatness. Obviously, I'm still on that road myself, so I'm no expert. But I've gone through many of the same struggles: forming a coherent concept from a vague idea, formatting a table that doesn't blind my readers, typing pages of fictional character bios. 
Fortunately, we have the LEAGUE OF FANTENDO CRITICS 2.0!!! Reading reviews from these users has inspired me to start my own reviewing service:
 
Actually, it's two reviewing services that use the same rating system, while meeting different needs. I'll explain the rating system further down... let's look at the distinctions first.
*The primary review service. When someone requests this, I will take my time reading the article to prepare an in depth review. I will identify what stands out as good and bad- in each area, I will also suggest possible improvements. I'll assign an overall score as well, and explain why it got that score. Because it is work-intensive, I'll limit this service to mostly complete or freshly completed articles. I won't review articles that have been reviewed by several other critics. If you're article doesn't qualify, don't worry, there is a second option!
*Quick Draw- A trimmed down version of the same review process. I'll focus more on what could be improved and current flaws, I'll skim the article, and present a more concise analysis. This service is available for articles that have been reviewed by others, articles I have already critiqued with Real Deal, and reviews of very incomplete articles.
No matter what your article is like, there is a review service for you! But now, let's look at the rating system.
So, I'm assuming that you have chosen your card by now, but if you haven't, this is your last chance..!
 
Picked one? Good! I will now use the card of your choice to predict your personality! This personality test also conveniently matches my rating system!
So each games score can be seen at a glance as a set of five cards. Four cards, each bearing a different suit, represents a different area of critique, and the number on each represents the score in that area (2 being poor, 10 being outstanding).
*'Clubs of Clarity'- Here I evaluate the writing and story. Where applicable, is the plot coherent and creative? Are there rampant spelling and grammatical errors? Does each section communicate the intended message?
*'Diamonds of Design'- Here I evaluate art and organization. Is there custom art in the article? Was preexisting art used to good effect? If there is no art, was the article organized well? Are tables and infoboxes formatted properly?
*'Hearts of Harmony'- Here I evaluate the core concept. Would the game be a practical addition to an existing franchise? If it's an original IP, does it sound like a good idea? If so, how well was the concept implemented?
*'Spades of Simulation'-Here I evaluate the reading experience. Since the game (usually) doesn't exist, can I envision what the game would be like? Is there enough content to make characters relatable and stories meaningful? Did I enjoy reading the article?
The fifth card is an overall grade of the article, with 4 ranks-
 
*Jack of Hearts- Quality ranges from poor to average. The article can still become an above average work, but it will require quite a bit of work. Keep working if the article isn't finished, and make some changes if it is. I recommend a Quick Draw after work is done, or checking with another reviewer for a second opinion.
*Queen of Clubs- Quality is already a little above average, so good job! With a little cleaning up and slight edits, the article could very well become Sysop Approved. Give it a try once you are done!
*King of Diamonds- Quality is already outstanding, and could be Sysop Approved in it's current state. If you're happy with the product as it is, you will be just fine, but with a little polish your work could become Featured!
*Ace of Spades- Quality is absolutely marvelous! I should be thanking you for the opportunity to experience this masterpiece! Are you sure you aren't a professional? There really isn't anything I can recommend- if it hasn't been featured yet, get on it, stat!
Now with all that out of the way, how about that personality test?
* If you picked Clubs, you are an extremely logical person. You like reading and writing, and take every minor detail into account. Your favorite cereal is Cheerios.
* If you picked Diamonds, you are an artsy person. You like watching movies and listening to music, and appreciate the effort put into every piece. Your favorite cereal is Trix (Lucky Charms as a close second).
* If you picked Hearts, you are an analytical person. You like debating and conversing, and often think outside the box. Your don't care what cereal you get, but you must have skim milk.
* If you picked Spades, you are a very imaginative person. You like doing a lot of things, and are good at them all, without being the best. You don't eat cereal, because its beneath you; you prefer pancakes with eggs.
*If you refused to choose a card, you are a paranoid, untrusting person. You won't let people have fun with their card-based personality quizzes. There is a very high chance you are a muffin, so you don't like cereal.
So.. was I close? Spot on? Way off the mark? Tell me below in the comments. If I was wrong, which Suit suits you better?
NYAN update is up! Why not check out the rest of Day 4 right now?
==Links==
Do not despair, mobile users! Here are your links.
*Intro Page
*Kirby: United launch
*2 Cents Forum reveal
*Double Deck review service
*Mini NYAN comic update
*Mystery Project Reveal!!
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