Luminox's Comics

Luminox's Comics is a plot-oriented series. It chronicles the story of a toa team on the run from Hapori Tohu's Forces.
==Characters==
===Luminox's Team===
Member 	Description
Luminox 	Toa of Twilight, and team leader. A genius, but knows nothing about other people.
Nyrak 	Toa of Lighting, and team muscle. Physically the strongest member of the team. She has a crush on Luminox.
Karoack 	Toa of Sonics, and team scientist. Mentally strongest of the team, but rather aloof, prefering to spend time in his room studying.
Ferran 	Toa of Iron, and team engineer. He lost his right arm in a disagreement with a Makuta.He designed his mechanical arm, and the team's weapons.
Newtraun 	Toa of Gravity, and team pilot. He for some reason, is a Nuva-Class Toa.
Charaun 	Toa of Plant Life, and team Mathmetiction. He is also Nuva-Class, and loves animals. He is pathetic in a fight.
Arex 	Paraplegic Toa of Water. She will be sent by Hapori Tohu to spy on Luminox.She has to use a wheelchair, as her legs do not work.
Veham 	Toa of Plasma. He will be sent by Hapori Tohu to spy on Luminox. He likes destroying n00bs and Makuta
Camcorder	A ToasterBot, and team chronicler. He has a camera for a brain, and his very smart. However, he can only speak N00b-ese.
===PGS===
Character 	Description
Commander Onkar	High ranking military leader, also a PGS, with his comic's charecters.
~DA~ 	Mercenary hired by Makuta Pena to abduct Luminox and destroy the team
Gavla 	Toa sent by Hapori Tohu to spy on Luminox
===Enemy Characters===
Character 	Description
Lord Mechanis	He is a mechanical genius, and has tried to take over the Comic Land. First seen in Luminox's Comics: Quantam Leap
Makuta Pena 	Female Makuta, who for some reason wants to capture or destroy Luminox. She is a genius.
KLC06 	She is the first of four successful Genetic Creations by Makuta Pena. She has been missing for a long time.
MKA08 	He is the third of four successful Genetic Creations by Makuta Pena. No one has ever seen him since his creation, but he is out there...
KT09 	Pena's Shadow Matoran lackey. She is the last of four successful Genetic Creations by Makuta Pena. She is currently missing.
Hapori Tohu 	In most comics, he is the kind leader of BZMetru. However, in these, he has grown overly paranoid, locking his brothed Hapori Dume in a closet, forcing infected Comic Makers to either be locked up, or be healed of their infection in a painful, if not life threatening way. Naturally, he assumes that any Toa with Shadow power is rouge, and thus, hates Luminox with a passion. However, he is not really bad.
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==The Story==
Part One
The story starts, as Luminox invites his team to stay at Outpost number 34, on Ahoradelcine.They arrive, and quickly move in, only for KT09, who followed them to join as a "character". She then tried to assassinate Luminox, only to be flattened by Nyrak's War Hammer. She is then told by Pena to rest, while Pena gathers her forces.
Rahkshi then attack BZMetru, and Pena accuses Luminox. Tohu, because of his bias against Luminox, agrees to help destroy Luminox. Sending his six most trusted Soldiers,to use a bio-bomb on Outpost number 34. This is a bomb that can destroy life, but not buildings, so it won't wreck the building. However, Luminox and team escape underground, only to find their supplies missing, due to a hungry Camcorder. They send Nyrak, who can shapeshift into matoran form, to get more, only for her to be captured after shooting an annoying guy. She escapes, but not before getting a tracker put on her wing. Hapori finds them, and sends his forces after them, only for them to leave, and prepare to take a stand against Tohu.
With their first strike, the team is easily deafeated. They then turn from six Toa to two Kaita, in an attempt to deafeat Tohu. They are at a stalemate, until Luminox, who is somehow seperated mentally from his Kaita, activates his shadow power, which he formerly tried to hide. He deafeats Tohu.
Part Two
His friends then demand his history. Not wishing them to know about him, Luminox became more aloof than ever, prompting Nyrak and Ferran to search through his journal. This failed, as Luminox caught them in the act. Later, the two, with help from Karoack, caught Camcorder and looked through his hard drive for the story of Luminox. They found he was a genetic experiment. He didn't tell them, for fear of being no longer trusted. However, his trust his kept.
Part Two point five: Quantam Leap
*Project temperarily abandoned.
Part Three
Luminox's Team is joined by three new members, Veham, Arex, and Gavla. Meanwhile, Pena hires ~DA~, a mercenary, to help with her schemes. The forces clash multiple times, before a hypnosis device, belonging to Gavla, is stolen, and used to defeat Luminox. Pena abducts him, and returns him to evil. When his team comes to rescue him, he kicks all their butts, simultaniously, until Ferran stuns him with a tranquilizing serum. They take him back, and return him to good.
Part Four
In progress, with new Vector Images.
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==Critical Reception and the future==
The original Comic topic probably has the record for least amount of comments, at about six. However, these comments point to a bright future for the comics. Additionaly, the comics are planning their first movie, Luminox's Comics: Quantam Leap, which will probably be the first movie in Xaniskit. The plotline of the movie will involve the death of most of the team, a takeover of the Comic Land, and time travel.
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==External Links==
Comics on BZPower
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Category:Plot-Oriented Comics