Snowfall's life

It was late at night under the vast indigo sky starclan warriors surrounded a starry lit pool talking deep in convesation. She's breaking the warrior code! one of the cats said a dark brown tom with broad shoulders, You are wrong Barkclaw very wrong she will save us! a white she cat said with defiance crackling in her gaze. The other starclan warriors felt dumbfounded with none other to say. Hhmp will see whitestar...will see. The warrior and leader locked gazes both with challenge in their gaze. 
*==                              Chapter 1 The making of an apprentice==
Snowkit hurry up Foxkit yowled 
Snowkit: Im coming im coming hold up!
Foxkit: ughhh it takes you so long she said pulling her paw over her head an licking it.
Snowkit: hhmpf well atleast I dont act so bossy like you.
Just then snowkit heared the yowl of the clan leader creekstar.
All cats old enough to catch their own prey gather under high ledge!!
Snowkit and foxkit gathered under highledge this is it me and foxkit are finally going to be apprentices!
foxkit do you promise to uphold the warrior code even the cost of your life 
foxkit: I do ....Then by the powers of starclan until you earn your warrior name you shall be know as Foxpaw!!
*==                                           Chapter 2 A new name==
Snowpaw was so excited when she earned her apprentice name Her first day was exhauhsting she was so happy when she finally got to go to sleep the darkrness enveloping her.
Snowpaw!! wake up snowpaw still felt drousy from yesterday still getting used to her new name. She got up following her mentor lionroar outside He was a great golden tom and very good at hunting Snowpaw couldnt wait to be a warrior at impress him ( no snowpaw doesnt have any affectionate feelings for lionroar) 
Lionroar: Finally your awake  were going to join foxpaw and her mentor bluewing today are you ready were going to be patrolling our borders.
foxpaw: Snowpaw! their you are! foxpaw yan to Snowpaw gleefully
Hold up Foxpaw! a gracefull dark grey she cat with a blue tinge surrounding her chuckled looking at foxpaw
Today were visiting The moutainclan border
Bluewing: well that sounds like a great experience for the apprentices!
Lionroar: well lets get going! he race into the woods
snowpaw followed behind her feet racing across the forest floor the scents of the trees and thrush! filled her nose with tempting scents She belonged here in the forest surrounded by the looming trees and the soft forest floor. suddenly lionroar and bluewing stopped snowpaw rushed and fell onto Foxpaw's back Foxpaw giggled Mouse brain 
Snowpaw couldnt help from snickering a little and turning red from embarresment.
Lionheart: shh quit playing you too this is moutain clan territory 
Snowpaw turned to look across the border with was a rock incline when she looked beyond she was amazed to see moutain and cliffs rock rock rock! she wondered how cats lived here! 
???: Hey what are you doing!!
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