Halo: Last Resort

==About==
Halo: Last Resort, is a small comic I have been working on for the past month or so, telling the tale of an ODST and his squadmate who have to scout the Jaimaican coast for possible Covenant troops hoping to use it as a steppinground for an attack on Cuba. As you may know, the SPARTAN-II Blue Team composed of Fred, Will, and Linda eventually undid the covenant holding Cuba, but that is not the point. At any rate, its my first comic, of which I hope will be many more. It is up at the link below, please comment on what I did right and what I can improve on. 
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