Spring Doggies (Echo's version)

My challenge is about Petal and Bumble from Eternal Night. I know that rp kind of died, but I immediately thought of them when I read the description for the challenge (idk why). Also, I've heard that some people think that they're adorable, so here goes!))
== Chapter One Edit ==
"Petal?"
Petal's ears lifted as she saw Bumble approaching her, carrying a slightly soaked rabbit in his jaws. He dropped it in front of her with an affectionate grin. 
"I figured that our pack's wonderful Third Dog could use some slightly-wet rabbit," he told her with a soft chuckle 
Petal snorted in amusement. "What about you? Don't wonderful hunters deserve slightly-wet rabbit as well?" 
Bumble glanced at the prey warily. He was tempted, but he knew very well what the right response was. Shaking his head, he pushed the rabbit closer to her. "Please, take it all. I'm not hungry." 
"Are you sure?" Petal pressed. "There isn't much prey left."
"I told you, I'm fine!" Bumble's voice was gentle, but slightly short-tempered and loud. The air was tense as Petal took a remorseful bite out of the rabbit. Bumble paced in circles around the den, stopping every so often to stop and stare through the entrance and exit. The rain had been pouring for what had seemed like an impossibly long time. Bumble even sensed Flame's anxiety as she stood outside her den, watching the few dogs willing to stay outside and eat. 
"I'm sorry, Petal," Bumble muttered softly. Petal lifted her head and glanced at him with a slowly wagging tail.
"It's fine!" she replied as cheerfully as she could. "This rain is making everyone go slightly crazy. I don't blame you for snapping."
Bumble whined and curled up although he was restless and slightly hyper from being pent up for so long. His eyes were still fixed on the bleak rain, and his ears twitched this way and that. Subconciously he let out another long, high-pitched whimper. 
Petal finished up the last of her rabbit and padded over to sit beside Bumble. "I know that spring always brings rain, but never this much rain!" She shook out her fur as if she was getting rained on herself. Bumble nodded in agreement. 
"It looks like the rain is letting up a little," he mused. "Want to ask Flame if we can go hunt?"
Petal nodded. "Sure!" she barked, following her mate into the camp. Flame looked pleased to see them as they approached, and she quickly cast her gaze up at the cloudy sky.
"Can Bumble and I go hunting?" Petal asked eagerly. 
"Of course," Flame replied. "Thanks for offering, actually. We need more prey, and most of the dogs just want to sit around like frogs on a log. I don't blame them, of course, but someone needed to do something about the food."
Petal and Bumble nodded in agreement before setting off into the forest.
More coming soon