Talon's Sorrow

== Prologue ==
The calico kitten race past her mother. She Darted out into the clearing, dazzled by the large camp. Her small paws thumped against the cool ground, as she race towards the stream.
"Spottedkit!" Yowled CloverTail, Spottedkit's mother. "Get Back Here!" Spottedkit of course, didn't Listen. She diverted her direction, making a beeline for the camps entrance. She Burst out of the entrance, grinning at her newfound freedom. Her Paws sunk into the soft sand. She Quickly redirected her path, heading for the forest.
Spottedkit paused her run, her breath coming in gasps. She Loved the forest. This was the third time she had ran, She couldn't stand camp. It Was to crowded. She Needed to be free...
== Chapter 1 ==
Spottedkit gazed at Coaststar, A knot of dread in her stomach. The other kittens were All But Yowling with happiness and pride, But today Spottedkit knew her life might change for better or for the worse. CoastStar called Up The Kittens one by one. Finally it was her turn.
"Spottedkit, Please step Up." Coaststar Called. She Padded forward, Her head held high. Her life was going to change, And she had no right to be ashamed of wanting to be free. Coaststar said a few words but Spottedkit didn't listen. Finally He Asked: "Do you take the responsibility of a Maulers Apprentice and take on the Name Of Spottedpaw?"
Taking a deep breath, She gave her answer: "No." There was A Collective gasp, And Spottedkit Smirked. She Had to be unpredictable.
"Why Not?" Asked CoastStar. His Tone Mildly Surprised
"I Need to be free. I Cannot live with always being controlled and following the rules. I am sorry if I have disappointed you but i am leaving. Spottedkit Said confidently.
"Then Go. You'll Be Welcomed back when you return." called CoastStar As she padded out of camp.
== Chapter 2 ==
She reached the edge of Coastclan's territory. She Turned around, memorizing her home. She turned her Amber gaze to the horizon. She gulped at the sight of a Twoleg place, not far from where she stood.
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