Finish The Story

WARNING
If you do not like to write, this competition isn't for you.
==About==
Basically, there will be a beginning of a scene. Everyone has to finish the rest using any details they like. Your stories can be comedy, dramatic, fantasy, romantic, ANYTHING. They can be long (not too long), they can be short. Doesn't matter. After everyone turns their story in, the judges will see which one was most entertaining to read.
Some weeks, there will be a certain theme that you have to follow. The comment section is where you will write the name of the story you want to win. 
==Rules==
Once your story is on the page, you cannot add extra details to make it better. The only thing you can do is fix your spelling errors (which im not going to do, im just copying and pasting what you give me ).
If you break that rule, you will be disqualified from winning that week 
The due dates will always be posted under the scene that we are on. Just look there instead of asking. It gets kind of annoying 
If you miss the due date, you cannot turn it in. No exceptions 
Ugh, missed an important detail. If you aren't able to find me online before the story is due, just put it in the comments.
==Judges==
Naomidp.png|Interest: Comedies, Mysteries, Romantics|link=Uniquenay
Joey27042013.png|Interest: Comedies, Horror, Thriller|link=Sunriseondarkenedseas
Brandon20042013.png|Interest: Romances|link=Gleek655
Shan26042013.png|Interest: Dramas|link=ShoeyOTP
Tyler20042013.png|Interest: Comedies|link=Smooth CriminaL
==Wins==
Every judge gives 1 point per round
Writers	Wins
Delilah	4
Ellie 	1
John 	2
Justin 	9
Lily 	5
Mau 	0
Tom 	1
Delilah	Ellie	John	Justin	Lily	Mau	Tom
x 	- 	x 	x 	x 	- 	-
This chart shows who has turned in their stories for the last round
CONGRATULATIONS JUSTIN FOR WINNING FINISH THE STORY!
==Scene Five (His Last Words)==
This is the final scene
The car was flipped over. There was blood and glass shattered everywhere. I felt like I was going to die. Then help arrive. They rescued my ex and I. We were in the hospital for 2 days. I was fine, but we were in separate rooms. So i had no idea how he was feeling. I asked the nurse when she came in, "Is he ok?"
"He's fine, but he might not make it" she said nervously. Tears started to form in my eyes. I was lost for words. My mouth got really dry. "Excuse me I have to go see him."
"No maam, you can't....hello?" I left the room and visited him, not caring if the nurse said no. He saw me come in, and his face lit up instantly. "How are you feeling?" I said with a half-smile. I remember exactly what he told me. He said... Continue 
LILY:
The car was flipped over. There was blood and glass shattered everywhere. I felt like I was going to die. Then help arrive. They rescued my ex and I. We were in the hospital for 2 days. I was fine, but we were in separate rooms. So i had no idea how he was feeling. I asked the nurse when she came in, "Is he ok?"  "He's fine, but he might not make it" she said nervously. Tears started to form in my eyes. I was lost for words. My mouth got really dry. "Excuse me I have to go see him." 
"No maam, you can't....hello?" I left the room and visited him, not caring if the nurse said no. He saw me come in, and his face lit up instantly. "How are you feeling?" I said with a half-smile. I remember exactly what he told me. He said "I feel fine because this is a joke! We fucking drugged your ass and knocked you out and put you in here and put make up and shit all over you to make you think we were in a car accident!". I stood there. I was lost for words. As much as I hated this, it turned me on. "Nice" I say happily. I then get on top of him and make out with him. This is amazing. I love this. I get off of him and wipe my mouth off with my bare hand. But as much as this turned me on, I feel like this guy's an asshole. "Fuck this, I'm out" i say. “You’re a bitch… you always were, that’s why I dumped your ass” he says. Before I can make a comeback, his monitor line thing goes straight and he dies. “HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAHAAHHAHA, YOU DIED!” I laugh and walk away. 
JOHN:
The car was flipped over. There was blood and glass shattered everywhere. I felt like I was going to die. Then help arrive. They rescued my ex and I. We were in the hospital for 2 days. I was fine, but we were in separate rooms. So i had no idea how he was feeling. I asked the nurse when she came in, "Is he ok?"?"He's fine, but he might not make it" she said nervously. Tears started to form in my eyes. I was lost for words. My mouth got really dry. "Excuse me I have to go see him."
"No maam, you can't....hello?" I left the room and visited him, not caring if the nurse said no. He saw me come in, and his face lit up instantly. "How are you feeling?" I said with a half-smile. I remember exactly what he told me. He said... “I want you to know that I really love you. I want you to take these.” he says as he give me roses. Then, he gives me a card. I open it and there’s a song.... “You are my sunshine, my only sunshine......”
I started crying. He was right there. He didn’t look good, but even though he was in a lot of pain, he was smiling and laughing. Then, he looked at me and gave me another thing. A necklace. I opened the necklace to find a picture of our first kiss. It was a magical day but too explicit so I can’t go into details.... But, it was magical! I looked at him and gently kissed him. The nurse followed me back into my room because it was getting late. I woke up the next morning. It was a very sunny day. Then I went to see him.
When I walked in, there was no one there. I asked a nurse and she told me to ask his nurse, Diane. I finally found Diane and asked her. She looked me and was beginning to cry. “He died in his sleep. There was nothing we could do.” I cried. “But, he told me last night to give you this notebook. I opened the notebook. On the first page, it started with, “I met this new girl, she is really cute but I’m too shy to talk to her.” I began to cry as I held it up against my chest and held on to that notebook, forever. 
DELILAH:
The car was flipped over. There was blood and glass shattered everywhere. I felt like I was going to die. Then help arrive. They rescued my ex and I. We were in the hospital for 2 days. I was fine, but we were in separate rooms. So i had no idea how he was feeling. I asked the nurse when she came in, "Is he ok?" "He's fine, but he might not make it" she said nervously. Tears started to form in my eyes. I was lost for words. My mouth got really dry. "Excuse me I have to go see him." "No maam, you can't....hello?" I left the room and visited him, not caring if the nurse said no. He saw me come in, and his face lit up instantly. "How are you feeling?" I said with a half-smile. I remember exactly what he told me. He said... "Don't...trust...them...." before closing his eyes forever. Just then the nurse runs in, her eyes abnormally red. "Excuse me miss, I believe I told you to stay in your room...." she says in an inhuman-like voice before she lunges towards me. 
JUSTIN:
The car was flipped over. There was blood and glass shattered everywhere. I felt like I was going to die. Then help arrive. They rescued my ex and I. We were in the hospital for 2 days. I was fine, but we were in separate rooms. So i had no idea how he was feeling. I asked the nurse when she came in, "Is he ok?" "He's fine, but he might not make it" she said nervously. Tears started to form in my eyes. I was lost for words. My mouth got really dry. "Excuse me I have to go see him." "No maam, you can't....hello?" I left the room and visited him, not caring if the nurse said no. He saw me come in, and his face lit up instantly. "How are you feeling?" I said with a half-smile. I remember exactly what he told me. He said, “How do you think I am?”, and laughed. I didn`t knew wheter to laugh or to cry, really. He was much worse than I was, his body stitched up, machines all around him, his face destroyed, only one thing remained from him, his blue eyes, I will never forget the way his blue eyes stared at me, when he was there, dying. I sat besides him. “I`m so sorry…. I`m so sorry….” Tears burst, I couldn`t control myself, I could barely express myself. “It was my fault, I was the one that was driving, the one that was distracted” I burst into tears again, “distracted `cause I was fighting wit you. I`m so st-stupis, I..” I again cry. I can see a small smile on his lips. “It wasn`t---your f-ault.” He said, he could barely talk.“I--- we were both fighting…. I-just feel like we should`ve never broke up. We- were fight-ing because we`re too stupid--- too stupid to love each other.” I burst into tears again. “I will-be gone. But I still want to be--- in your heart.” I burst into tears again. “I- have to tell you- something…“ he said, loosing his voice, I approached him until we were face to face. “I have to tell you something…” He said again. “I- love big buts and I cannot lie.” He then gave his last breath. Those were the last words he ever said to me. I will never forget them. Never.
NASIA:
(When I wrote the beginning, I finished the story also because I was bored. So this was my version.)
The car was flipped over. There was blood and glass shattered everywhere. I felt like I was going to die. Then help arrive. They rescued my ex and I. We were in the hospital for 2 days. I was fine, but we were in separate rooms. So i had no idea how he was feeling. I asked the nurse when she came in, "Is he ok?"
"He's fine, but he might not make it" she said nervously. Tears started to form in my eyes. I was lost for words. My mouth got really dry. "Excuse me I have to go see him."
"No maam, you can't....hello?" I left the room and visited him, not caring if the nurse said no. He saw me come in, and his face lit up instantly. "How are you feeling?" I said with a half-smile. I remember exactly what he told me. He said "better, not great, but better." I went to touch his forehead and looked him in the eyes, "Im sorry about what happened the other day. If we wouldn't have argued about something so stupid, we would have never got into that car accident." He grins "No no, it was my fault. Don't worry about it." We sat in silence for about 3 minutes. "Have you talked to your mom?" I asked. "Yea, shes coming to visit anytime now. My brother is coming also." "Nice of them." Another 2 minutes pass. I started to read a magazine that was sitting beside his bed. "There's something I've been wanting to tell you that I haven't said in a long while" he says while looking at me in pain. "Yea?" "I know we broke up and all, but I still love you. I will always love you. Even if we never get back together. I feel like you are the only person who knows me. You know all of my secrets.. And lastly, I want you to know that.." He pauses, as if he lost his thought. "I want you to know that..." His heart rate started to fall on the monitor. Nurses start to run in the room. "Whats going on..whats happening..Dave..Dave!" I say worriedly. They told me I had to leave. I couldn't. I wouldn't. They pushed me out, as I was screaming for his attention. Before they shut the door, I saw him looking at me, with tears falling from his eyes. He mouthed "Im sorry." His mom was running down the hallway, she finally arrived. "Where is he? WHERE IS HE." She yelled at the nurse. I left, not knowing what may have been the outcome. There were so many thoughts running through my mind. I cried, hoping they saved him. Later that day, his brother text-ed me. Telling me, he didn't make it.
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