Bits of Plot to Remember

On later re-writes, remember this stuff for earlier chapters:
The Reformation - Deus Adest
In Chapter 7 Ed said he would only go as far as Paradise
‘This road leads to Zion and Paradise. I’ve only been down that far once. That must be where the trucks are going, although fuck knows why.’
‘Please, Brother McQuade.’
‘OK then Father, I’ll take you to Paradise, but no further.’
In chapter 7 TT was scared of what AB might do with the slaves in Angster if he put them there:
‘He’d sell them,’ sighed the bishop. ‘To whoever. The archbishop wants money for his new Temple. Those slaves wouldn’t be in the Stadium a day before he’s set up an auction at the turnstiles. Can you imagine the turmoil? The upset? Evermarch has been quiet for six months now. Can you begin to imagine how the city will react to a slave market at Angster Stadium? The scars of last year are still raw. And then think of the slaves. More dislocation, and all to be moved from one farm to another.  At least they are warm in the jungle. Perhaps they are better off where they are.’
See Slavery in Evermarch
Chapter 8, Ruth mentions Tim. Who is that?
‘Some more stuff that might fit you,’ she explained. ‘Oh, and Tim is coming over tomorrow to look at your plumbing, so you can have a proper bath in here.’
For Ray Lorric
I had decided he doesn't swear. Says flip etc, so will have to check previous chapters
Chapter 11 TT wants to sort out some annoying clergy
He needed to have a word with Brother Acton. And find another job for Father Boniface outside of the Temple, maybe even outside of the city entirely. See how the old fool like that.
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