Evan's Story part 1

Hey, I felt i should make a NEW version of this since i don't like the ORIGINAL  one.
-Evan
==Chapter 1: Birth ==
One Day, Two Birds, Bradley Peterson and Victoria Peterson Were running from cops. They had then ran into an abandoned warehouse, where Victoria watched  her egg hatch  , "I Should Call Him....Evan!" She Said. They had then ran into their house where it was safe. Just until someone came in......It was PIGRAM! "Hmm, You Get Them  Yet?" said Pigram, "WHAT?! we are not stealing eggs! we need money for our children" said Bradley.
==Chapter 2: Meeting Siblings==
Evan then saw his siblings for the first time!, "Evan, This Is Jason" said Bradley pointing at jason who was a yellow bird with an orange belly."Here is Patrica". Said Victoria, "And Here is Shawn!" said Bradley, then a pig in a cloak took Shawn and threw him onto a truck. "THIS IS YOUR PUNISHMENT!" yelled pigram.
==Chapter 3: The Nightmare==
they had thought off ways to get the eggs but all attemps failed. they then look at Evan, "You, Know what i'm thinking?" said bradley, Victoria then nodded her head yes. They then went to the Lab located in the middle of town. they had then Threw evan into a chamber and bradley flipped a switch causing green fumes to go around Evan and after a moment of seconds they stopped it and they had seen was that Evan was green and had SCALES good thing was he was STILL a bird. Evan then looked in a mirror "Waaaaaaaa!" cried Evan
part 2, coming soon.