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Titolo: Article translation (part III)

Hi again!
Is all correct? :-)
"POLIDANZA" IS AWARDED THE THIRD PRIZE IN THE INTERNATIONAL CONTEST OF
COMPOSITION “GIUSEPPE BENASSI”
There is one more feature that makes of Armonite a special band: the 29 of
October 2000 Paolo wins the third prize in the VI International Contest of
Composition “Città di Pavia” organized by the association “Giuseppe Benassi”
,  that took place in Teatro Fraschini in Pavia. The chairman of the jury
was Luciano Chailly, a composer of international renown, who in past times
had been the artistic director of RAI and of the Teatro alla Scala in Milan.
This prize is therefore very important because it marks the quality of
Armonite’s music.
The winner track is the piano transposition of “Polidanza”, that will be
included in the next album in two versions: it will be played by the band
and also by a soloist of great talent.
<<”Polidanza”, because it is based on the polyrhythm of a theme that arises
again modularly and, for this reason, in my opinion, very catchy. The
tonality is D major, the modulation is “Staccato con fuoco”: an agile and
light-hearted composition?
Maybe agile, but surely not light-hearted: syncopations, bewildered accents,
odd times…I imagine people who dance in a big square…>>
Thanx and bye!!! ;-)

 Is all correct? :-)
"POLIDANZA" AWARDED THIRD PRIZE IN “GIUSEPPE BENASSI” INTERNATIONAL
COMPOSERS' COMPETITION.
There is one more feature that makes Armonite a special band: on the 29th
October 2000 Paolo won third prize in the VI International Contest of
Composition “Città di Pavia”, organized by the association “Giuseppe
 Benassi”, which was held in the Teatro Fraschini in Pavia. The chairman of
the jury was Luciano Chailly, a composer of international renown, who in the
past times was artistic director of RAI and of the Teatro alla Scala in
Milan.
Armonite's winning of this prize is therefore very important because it
reflects the quality of their music.
The winning item was the piano transposition of “Polidanza”, which,
incidentally, will be included in the next album in two versions: it will be
played by the band and also by a talented soloist, (NOME?).
Because it is based on the polyrhythm of a theme that arises again
modularly, ”Polidanza” is, in my opinion, very catchy. The tonality is D
major, the modulation is “Staccato con fuoco”. An agile and light-hearted
composition.
Maybe agile, but surely not light-hearted: syncopations, bewildered accents,
odd times…I imagine people who dance in a big square…>>
L'ULTIME FRASE SONO CONTRADIZZIONE. POI DAREMI PIU INFORMAZIONI?
Ciao
John

 L'ULTIME FRASE SONO CONTRADIZZIONE. POI DAREMI PIU INFORMAZIONI?
"L'ultima frase č in contraddizione. Puoi darmi piů informazioni?" ;-)
Thanx John for your support.
"An agile and light-hearted composition?" is a sort of question.
"Maybe agile, but surely not light-hearted: syncopations, bewildered
accents,
odd times.I imagine people who dance in a big square" is the answer! :-)
Ciao e grazie!
--
Paolo

 played by the band and also by a talented soloist, (NOME?).
Could I finish the sentence after "soloist" without specifying any name?
--
Paolo

 composition.
I'd like to underline that Polidanza is so titled because of the Polyrhythm.
It's for this reason that I translated:
<<"Polidanza" because it is based on the polyrhythm of a theme that arises
again modularly and, for this reason, in my opinion, very catchy.>>
What do you think 'bout this sentence?
--
Paolo

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 John
"Grazie per aver corretto il mio italiano. Ne ho bisogno!" ;-)

 "Grazie per aver corretto il mio italiano. Ne ho bisogno!" ;-)
O, più correttamente, "ne HA bisogno!" :-)
Grazie a te per le tue correzioni! :-)
--
Paolo