Newsgroup: it.cultura.linguistica.inglese
Titolo: Could anyone correct my letter please ?

Ciao a tutti,
devo inviare una lettera al mio prossimo datore di lavoro e non vorrei
fare troppi errori. Qualcuno puó darmi un'occhiata please.
Hi xxxx,
I'm writing this e-mail to clear some doubts I have, I would hope you
can help me.
Only this afternoon I received by post the contract and the offer, so
in a few minutes (or tomorrow if I don't find the boss) I'm going to
resign from my current employment.
The secretary of my company told me my notice period will terminate on
15.15.02.
But I would know how strict is the starting date I'm writing on the
contract. What if I amicably agree with my employer to terminate my
employemt before two months, after sending the contract to xxxxxx.
Usually, in Italy, the problem is solved offering to the future
employee a document with a legal value with no starting date, rather
than a contract.
No problem at all, I think having a contract is better. But I would
not resign from my company, and then see Portal doesn't accept my
contract because it's early than I wrote on the contract.
So, what I'm asking for it's an opinion, if I risk something or xxxx
is really interested to me to be flexible on the dates or simply I
don't need to press on my boss to finish early my notice period.
The second question, on the contract is written it's valid for five
working days since 1st November. It's clear that the five days expired
yesterday. Any problem ?
Maybe you could feel this is a foolish e-mail, but I would not lose
the opportunity with xxxxxx for some bureaucratic cavils, because I
think it's a good chance for my career.
Thank you and excuse me for my incorrect English. I appreciate the
professional manner in which the hiring was conducted.
With regards,
Max

 I would like to know if the starting date I am writing on the contract is
flexible in any way, since I might ask my employer if the notice deadline
can be shortened. In Italy we usually solve this problem by giving the
future employee a legal document with no starting date, rather than a
contract. However, the contract you sent me will work just fine, though it
would be unfortunate if I resigned from my company, and then find that
Portal does not accept my contract because it is signed for a later date. I
would therefore ask you if you think that xxxx might accept a certain
flexibility on the starting date, or if I should rather press my boss to let
me leave at an earlier date.
My second  question refers to the contract validity. It says it is valid for
5 working days starting on November 1st. Since that deadline has expired
yesterday, I wonder if it might represent a problem.
Thank you in advance for your time. I am excited to have a chance to work
with xxxx, and I hope that our relationship will not be compromised by small
details such as these.
Thank you for the professionality shown throughout the hiring process.
Please accept my apologies for any mistakes as I write in English.
.
Kind regards,
Max
Well. Siccome per alcune cose non ho compreso bene cosa tu intendessi
(quindi ho interpretato ricorrendo ad una traduzione letterale verso
l'italiano), spero di aver reso bene il messaggio che volevi dare.
B.