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Titolo: (Per Laverdure) Il Jean-Renaud "antichizzato"

Carissimo Jacopo, ecco il Jean-Renaud antichizzato e "lallansizzato". Anche
se, purtroppo, senza rime, l'aspetto dovrebbe essere quindi diventato quello
di una ballata tradizionale nel lallans stereotipato del XVI-XVII secolo.
Ergo:
- Grafia quanto più inconsistente possibile;
- Uso smodato delle "y";
- Mantenimento grafico della "e" muta finale;
- Eliminazione di -ll finale (sa' , ha', a'...)
- Ballad commonplaces usati ogni qual volta possibile;
- Lessico tipico ("gar", "mither", "sae", "huis", "yode", "dochter",
"maun"...);
- Participi presenti in -an / -and (e "gaend") ;
- Orrore totale per il pronome relativo, come da buon uso germanico.
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KYNGE RENAWDES HAMECAMYNG FRAE WARRE
Kynge Renawde frae War came hame
Hys Guttes houdan in hys Handes.
Hys Mither stoode att her Bowers Window
Spyed her Sonne Renawde a-cumman.
Renawde, Renawde cheere in Rejoycyng!
Thy Wyffe is wyth Chylde of a Kynge!
Alas, bit nouther for Sonne and Wyffe
Can I rejoyce in cheeryng sweete.
Gae then my Mither, gae thou in Haste,
and mak my Bedde baith safte and white!
Schort Tymme haue I for to rest there,
By Midnichte am I to passe awa'.
Bit haue thy Bedde made doun here,
thy pregnaunt Wyffe so maun not heare.
An whan the Nychte war waye vp mete
Kynge Renawde hee turnit a Ghoste.
Not had ybroke the Morn to Daune,
an a' the Seruaunts were a-weepynge,
an' by the Howre of Meale-Eatynge
the Maydens a' wer crying in the ha'.
Now telle mee my Mither deire,
Quhy gar a' owre Servaunts wepe sae luid?
Dochter, a-laugan owr Horsses
They garde the ffyneste droune.
Now telle mee o Mither sae deire,
is a' this Wepynge for ae Horsse?
Whan Renawde sa' cume hame
heele brynge the ffyneste Steides.
An telle mee o Mither sae deire,
Quhy gar a' owre Maydenes wepe sae luid?
Dochter, a-laugan owre Linen
they garde the neweste gae.
Now telle mee o Mither sae deire,
is a' this Wepynge for ae Pys o' Linen?
Whan Renawde sa' cume hame
heele brynge the ffyneste Hollan!
An telle mee o Mither sae deire,
Wha bee a' these Slaughs I do heare?
Dochter, itt is bit the Carpyntere
a-fittan the Flvre as thou can heare.
 
Now telle mee o Mither sae deire,
Quhy are a' these Clockes a-ringan?
Dochter, itt is bit the holy Processyoun
a-gand a' around ffor Rogacyoun.
An telle me nowe o Mither sae deire,
Wha is a' this Syngyng that I do heare?
Dochter, itt is bit the holy Processyoun
a gand a' around and around owre Huis.
Eicht Dayes, eicht Dayes had barely gaed
Whan shee woud mak vp to the Nynes
Tymme was cum for her to gyue Byrthe
an shee longit for the Mass to heare.
Bit telle mee now o Mither sae deire,
Wilk Attyre am I to-daye to dress in?
O tak the whyte, o tak thou the grey,
O tak the swarte gin yee chvse best.
Now telle mee o Mither sae deire,
wha sall itt stand a' this swarte ffor?
To a Wyfman gaend to gyue Byrthe
is Swart ffar an ffar the beste Colour.
Bitt as they yode acrosse the Fieldes
Thre Schepherds yode an sayde sae
Heres the Wyffue o' that gentyll Laird
wee toke an buryit a gistern Day!
Now telle mee o Mither sae deire,
wha gar these Schepherdes saye?
They saye wee maun mak haste an rin
gin wee wull nae the Holy Mass misse.
An whan shee steppit into the Kyrke
shee was handit a Kendyll o' Waxe.
An whan for Prayer shee fe' doun on her Knies
Shee felte the Earthe shiver vndir her Benke.
Now telle me o Mither sae deir,
Quhy gars the Earthe shiver sae strang?
Dochter, itt is Tymme now to tell thee
Renawde is deid an buryit ffor lang.
Syn Kynge Renawde is buryit an deid
heres the Lutyll to a' my Gowd an Rynges.
O tak a' my Rynges o tak a' my Joyes
O tak a' thy Care foor Renawdes Sonne.
O Earth, oppen wide, o Earth berst in twa
lett mee rejoyne Renawde my Kynge!
An Earth opnit wide an Earth barst in twa
an sae was a' that beautë engoulfryt.
 
 
Salut,
*Riccardo Venturi*
(Stavolta ometto la signature, è troppo lunga da ricopiare!)
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Riccardo Venturi typed:
: Carissimo Jacopo, ecco il Jean-Renaud antichizzato e "lallansizzato".
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Bellissima! Subito sulla mia pagina!
Grazie mille :)
jacopo
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