Other specific suggestions: Section 2: region of interest (ROI) performing motions does not make sense to me	['non', 'non', 'non', 'non', 'non', 'non', 'non', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg', 'arg']	paper quality