Other critics called his style `` , '' uneven `` , '' careless '' , `` clumsy '' , and `` vulgar '' . Other critics called his style `` vulgar , `` uneven , `` clumsy , `` awkward , '' and `` careless . ''
Pengkritik lain menyebut gayanya "," "tidak sekata "," "ceroboh" '," "kekok" ', dan "kasar" '. Pengkritik lain menyebut gayanya "kasar," "tidak sekata," kekok, "kekok," "dan" ceroboh. ''