質問: 英検準二級の英作文の添削お願いします。
回答: 言い回しを変えました。 I agree with the idea that college students should live with their parents. I have two reasons for this. Firstly, should something happened to students, they are safer because their parents are near by. Secondly, their parents can back up their students by doing house chores. They save the time for their homework.