質問: 英訳の添削をお願いします。その1 次のあいさつ文の英訳をしたのですが、添削をお願いします。 「*****」を椿の美しい島、○○で開催できますことを市民ともどもお喜び申し上げます。 ご参加いただきましたアスリートの皆様、ようこそいらっしゃいました。 5月のさわやかなこの季節に、多くの選手をお迎えできますことを大変嬉しく思っています。市民も皆様が繰り広げる元気と勇気の感動物語を楽しみにお待ちしておりました。 特に子供たちは選手との交流を待ち望んでいました。こどもたちが選手との交流を通して世界観を広げて、将来の夢と希望に向かって強くたくましく進んでいくことを期待しています。 on behalf of all fellow citizens, i am very proud of having “***” here in ○○. all athletes, welcome to ○○, which is well-known for beautiful camellias blossoming and greeting you everywhere. we are very happy to have you all in may which is the most beautiful time of the year. all my fellow citizens have been looking forward to your exciting race which always gives us encouragement and spirit. especially children have long been waiting for this wonderful opportunity to interact with you. we wish that they can broaden their understanding of the world and learn to pursuit their goals and dreams through this experience. よろしくお願いします。<(_ _)>ペコリ
回答: 気の効いた演説調の英文はあまり得意ではないのですが、 on behalf of all fellow citizens, i am very honored to organize/host “***” here in ○○. i would like to wolcome all the guest athletes, to ○○, a town? well-known for it's beautiful camellias of spring time. we are very happy to have you over in may that is the most beautiful time of the year with all camellias in full bloom. all my fellow citizens have been looking forward to the exciting race that is about to start because this race is always something that gives us encouragment and appreciation of true spirit of sport/competition. especially our children have long been waiting for this wonderful opportunity to interact with our guest athletes. we hope that they will broaden their views of the world and learn to pursuit their goals and dreams in their future lives through this precious experience. のような感じでどうでしょうか。もともと良く出来ていますので、あまり参考にならないかもしれませんが。