質問: 大学受験英作文添削お願いいたします 大学受験浪人生の者です よろしければ添削お願いいたします 問題の設問 students at many university in japan are reqrired to study a foreign language, usually english. some university require students to study more than one foreign language. some people say universities should not require students to study a foreign language at all. which do you think is the best policy? write a paragraph explaining your opinion. give at least one appropriate reason to support your answer. 自分の解答 i think that students need to study more than one foreign language. that is because if students study foreign languages, they can be exposed to foreign cultures which are hidden in foreign languages.
回答: >i think that students need to study more than one foreign language it's unclear what language you are referring to. you need to specify that. >that is because if students study foreign languages, they can be exposed to foreign cultures which are hidden in foreign languages. if i were you, i would say "second-foreign language other than english." also, you need to explain the sentence above, since you are trying to discuss the relation between language and culture.