質問: 添削してください この歌は16世紀半ばまで伝承で受け継がれた。またシェイクスピア(william shakespeare)の「ウィンザーの陽気な女房たち(the merry wives of windsor)」の劇中に曲名が出てきたりした。このことから当時いかに広く歌われていたかがうかがえる。他の資料などから、17世紀にはイングランドの誰もが知っている流行曲となったことがわかった。 ⇨this song was handed down until the middle of the 16th century. in addition, this song are appeared in “the merry wives of windsor” by william shakespeare. from this it can see how widely sung at that time. furthermore, form other sources, it turned out that it became a popular song known to everyone in the 17th century in england. >伝承で受け継がれた というのをbe handed downで表しました。 こちらの英文の添削をお願いします。
回答: 以下のとおりお答えします。 例によって、「お訳の英文・説明・添削文」の順に列挙します。 >⇨this song was handed down until the middle of the 16th century. in addition, this song are appeared in “the merry wives of windsor” by william shakespeare. from this it can see how widely sung at that time. furthermore, form other sources, it turned out that it became a popular song known to everyone in the 17th century in england. ⇒ほとんど完璧とお見受けしました。間違いはit can see ~くらいと思いますが、これを含めて次の改善をお勧めします。 *~まで伝承で受け継がれた:was inherited and handed down until ~。 *また:in addition/also(どちらでも)。 *シェイクスピアの「~」の劇中に:in the play of w. shakespeare's "~"。 *当時いかに広く歌われていたか:how widely (it was) sung at that time。 *~がうかがえる:it can be seen/we can see ~。 *流行曲:a popular song/tune。 ☆( )内は「省略可」を、/は「(前後)交換可」を示します。 添削文まとめ ⇒this song was inherited and handed down until the middle of the 16th century. in addition/also, (the name of) the song appeared in the play of w. shakespeare's "the merry wives of windsor". from this, it can be seen/we can see how widely (it was) sung at that time. from other sources, it turned out that in the 17th century it became a popular song/tune known to everyone in england.