質問: 英文添削お願いします。(教訓編) 何かを学ぶためには、自分で体験する以上にいい方法はない. there is no better way to learn something than experiencing it by ourselves. 幸せはいつも自分の心が決める。 it's your mind that always decides whether you are happy or not. 逆境もよし、順境もよし。要はその与えられた境遇を素直に生き抜くことである. it doesn't matter whether the situation is adversity or favorable circumstances, what is important is to live through those given surroundings obediently.
回答: gです。 ごめんなさい、この質問に気がつきませんでした. では、また、私なりに書かせてくださいね。 >何かを学ぶためには、自分で体験する以上にいい方法はない. there is no better way to learn something than experiencing it by ourselves. いいでしょうね. 悪くはないですが、もう少し違った表現にした方がすっ着る巣のではないかと思います. experiencing is the best way to learn something. experience can not be replaced by anything if you want to learn something effectively. the most effective way to learn something is to experience it yourself. 少し視点を変えて同じフィーリングを出すとしたら、 how can you imagine to learn how to ride a bicyle without actually riding on one? that's learning by experience; the best way to learn something. learning by experiece is the best way. 元の文章に帰って、 there is no better way than learning by experience. >幸せはいつも自分の心が決める。 it's your mind that always decides whether you are happy or not. alwaysをit's always your mind thatにすると、このいつもが生きてきます. これで、いつも決める、というフィーリングが心がいつも、というフィーリングに変わってくるわけですね. 他の言い方としては、 your happiness depends on how your mind looks at things. your mind is always the one that determines how happy you are. 同じフィーリングを少し違った視点(日本語の「訳」は違いますね)から見て書くと、 only mind can capture the real happiness. happyness is just thw way we look things through out minds. there is no happienss if our mind can not see it. >逆境もよし、順境もよし。要はその与えられた境遇を素直に生き抜くことである. it doesn't matter whether the situation is adversity or favorable circumstances, what is important is to live through those given surroundings obediently. circumstancesを取ってしまいましょう. 違った言い方としては、 no matter what kind of situation that you are in, accept what it is and live thru with it. don't bother to check what kind of situation you are in. it's more important to just live thru with what you are in. you should not be bothered by the situation that you are in. living up with what you are given is more meaningful. これら全て教訓的なものですから、言う相手によって、少しずつ代わってくるでしょうね. 自分に言い聞かせるのであれば、 1) don't be scared and avoid experiencing anything in front of you. you are actually learning by exprience,the world best way to learn. 2) you decide how happy you are. just be thankful to anything around you, and the world will change in your favor naturally. 3) don't let a bad situation win over you! challege it and grab the chance to overcome. now you can change the bad situation into another solid ability to become better-you. 独り言でした. これでいかがでしょうか。 分かりにくい点がありましたら、補足質問してください。