質問: 自由英作文の添削をお願いします。 課題:how do you conduct your lessons in all english?150字前後の英語で答えよ。 we are going to have to conduct our english lessons in all english under globalization .the course of study are saying same thing.however, when we do it, we have to convert it gradually such as, sometimes english, almost english and all english, depending on student's level. in "sometimes english class" the teacher uses english at greeting, ice breaking and simple classroom english to remove student's hesitation of using english. in "almost english class" teacher conduct their english lesson in english expecting difficult explanation.in that case the teacher makes the student with high level explain what he or she said to the student with low level. finally, i would like to convert my lesson to all english class by third semester. i would like to convert my lesson from japanese centered lesson to all english lesson gradually with naturalizing english. グローバル化が進む中、私達は英語の授業は英語で行わなければならない。学習指導要領にも同じことが明文化されている。しかし、私達がそれを行う時は生徒のレベルに応じて「時々英語」「殆ど英語」「全部英語」というように少しづつそれへの転換を行わなければならない。 「時々英語の授業」の授業において教師は挨拶、アイスブレイク、クラスルームイングリッシュで英語を使うことで生徒が英語を使うことへのためらいを取り除いていく。 「ほとんど英語の授業」では、難しい説明を除き殆ど英語を使う。その時、わからない生徒に対してはわかる生徒に教師が言ったことを説明させる。 そして最終的に3学期末までにallイングリッシュにコンバートしていきたく思う。 この様に少しづつ英語に慣れさせながら日本語中心の授業からallイングリッシュ転換していく。
回答: >課題:how do you conduct your lessons in all english?150字前後の英語で答えよ。 ⇒以下のとおりお答えします。(誤数が増えるかも知れませんが、適宜、取捨選択なさってください。) >we are going to have to conduct our english lessons in all english under globalization .(いきなり「~しなければならない」よりは、「~すべき時代に居合わせている」とし、「グローバル化が進む中」は「こんなにも」というような語を添えるといいかも知れません。) ⇒we happen to be in the period when we should have our english lessons in all english under such a globalization as it is. >the course of study are saying same thing.(「学習指導要領」は言い方を変えて、半固有名詞として扱いましょう。また「教員用手引書」という説明をつけてもいいでしょうね。) ⇒the same thing is also stated expressly in curriculum guidelines (teacher's manual). >however, when we do it, we have to convert it gradually such as, sometimes english, almost english and all english, depending on student's level. (「時々英語」「殆ど英語」「全部英語」は、「○○英語で」のようにし、表現法も統一しましょう。また、「~しなければならない」より「~する方がよい」としたらいかが?) ⇒but when we do it, we had better convert it gradually according to the level: "sometimes in english", "almost in english" or "always in english". >in "sometimes english class" the teacher uses english at greeting, ice breaking and simple classroom english to remove student's hesitation of using english.(in "sometimes english class" the...やstudent'sなどの小さなミスを訂正しましょう。) ⇒in "sometimes in english " class, the teacher uses english at greeting, ice breaking and simple classroom english to remove students' hesitation of using english. >in "almost english class" teacher conduct their english lesson in english expecting difficult explanation.(上にならって「先生」はthe teacherで統一しましょう。→3単現のs、「~除いて」の綴りも訂正。) ⇒in "almost in english " class the teacher conducts his/her english lesson, literally almost in english except for difficult explanation. >in that case the teacher makes the student with high level explain what he or she said to the student with low level.(英語的には「この場合」の方が、学生は複数形にするのがいいかも。) ⇒in this case the teacher makes the high-level students explain what he/she says to the lower-level students. >finally, i would like to convert my lesson to all english class by third semester.(「私ごとを言えば」、「『常に英語で』タイプに」などを追加。) ⇒finally, on my private affairs, i would like to convert my english skill to "always in english" type by third semester. >i would like to convert my lesson from japanese centered lesson to all english lesson gradually with naturalizing english.(「~が大切だと思う」や「一歩一歩・着実に」を入れ、後者を強調しましょう!) ⇒anyway, i think it is important for us to to convert gradually our lerning from japanese centered lesson to all english lesson step by step. 添削文を続けて書けばこうなります。(単語数:169語) we happen to be in the period when we should have our english lessons in all english under such a globalization as it is. the same thing is also stated expressly in curriculum guidelines (teacher's manual). but when we do it, we had better convert it gradually according to the level: "sometimes in english", "almost in english" or "always in english". in "sometimes in english " class, the teacher uses english at greeting, ice breaking and simple classroom english to remove students' hesitation of using english. in "almost in english " class the teacher conducts his/her english lesson, literally almost in english except for difficult explanation. in this case the teacher makes the high-level students explain what he/she says to the lower-level students. finally, on my private affairs, i would like to convert my english skill to "always in english" type by third semester. anyway, i think it is important for us to to convert gradually our lerning from japanese centered lesson to all english lesson step by step.