質問: 英作文の添削をお願いします。 外国に住んでみると、「人間、みな同じ」との感想を持つ。イギリス人と付き合ってみても 確かにそう思えてくる。彼らが悲しみや喜びに反応する様や相手の立場を考える点は いかにも日本人に似ている。恥ずかしがりやで、すぐに友人にはなれないが、いったん 友人になれば驚くほど互いに心の琴線にふれあうことができる。 when i lived in a foreign country, i thought people are essentially equal. i surely felt so in communicating with some english. they and japanese are so alike as to how react to sadness or joy, or as to considering other positions. we are so shy that we can't become friends soon, but, after becoming friends, we can surprisingly move each other. 意外なところで時制に気を遣いました。 回答よろしくおねがいします。
回答: 添削例と私の訳をつけてみました。参考にしてください。 添削 when i lived in a foreign country, i thought people are created essentially equal. i surely felt so in communicating with some english people. we are so much alike as to how react to sadness or joy, or as to considering others' standing points. we are so shy that we can't become friends soon, but, after becoming friends, we can surprisingly go along with each other. 試訳 if you live in a foreign country, you will probably come to think that people are basically the same. knowing british people, i came to think so, too. they are very much like japanese as to how they react to other people's feelings of sorrow and joy, and how they try to think from others' stand points of view. they are rather shy, and it may be difficult to be friends with them at the beginning, but once you become friends with them, you will be surprised to learn that british people and japanese people can share each other's feelings so well.