質問: 英作文の添削を 課題で、"a part-time job for me"というタイトルの英作文をしました。 文法的な間違いや、不自然な表現がなく、ちゃんと意味が通るかどうか不安なので、添削をしていただきたいと思い、投稿しました。 よろしくお願いします。 i don’t work part-time now. because i’m very busy with study now and i cannot find an offer of a part-time job that condition conforms to me, nearby my house. however, it is not that i don't work at all. my relative sometimes asks me to mow the grass of the field and vacancy. and she asks me help with the final income tax return at the end of the year. another relative, cannot use computer, sometimes asks me to make documents with a microsoft office word. the member of a municipal assembly of the acquaintance’s husband of my father asks me to create his website. the reward of these work is more expensive than the wage of the general part-time job. however, there are few incomes because there is little work. i will want to do work of distributing mails at the post office in next winter vacation if i work part-time. i've ever done this work when i was a tenth grader, and this work was pleasant. and there is a post office near my house. i can go there by bicycle in about thirty minutes. it is not suitable to deliver mails for me. when i worked once to deliver mails by bicycle, i took time very much to finish work because i cannot ride a motor bicycle. so i delivered it by bicycle. but i ran slow by bicycle. and i wasn’t good to learn the route very much. therefore the vice-postmaster changed my work into distributing mails. this work was easier than delivering mails. it was worm in post office and i was able to have confectionery, oranges, juice and for a break. but my wage was higher than the other part-time worker because the wage of the postman was applied even after work changed because at first i was adopted as the postman that is higher wage than worker of distributing mails. so i was able to work easily and get much money.
回答: 読みました。 大体意味はわかりましたが ところどころ意味不明のところがありますし文法の間違いもあります。ただ こういうご投稿の場合 元の日本語をつけていただかないときちんとした添削ができません。 それにとても長いので添削するにはかなりの時間がかかります。 補足欄を使って日本語のご提示をしていただけますと 少し時間がかかりますがきちんと添削ができると思います。 お急ぎでしょうか。なにぶん週末にかかりますし本日はもう遅くしている暇がありません。 とりあえず 元の日本語のご提示をしていただけませんでしょうか。 日本語がつくことによって他の方がご添削くださるかもしれません。