質問: 英文を添削してください。 did the constitution create 1 country or 13 countries?という質問に対し、 独立宣言では13の州は自由で独立した国家だとしたが、実際は憲法第2条で強調されている通り、それらは単一の国ではない。」と言おうと思うのですが、 in the declaration of independence, 13 states were a free and independence state, but in fact they are not a single country, as emphasized in article 2 of the constitution. こちらの英文で問題ないでしょうか? 宜しくおねがいします。
回答: >in the declaration of independence, 13 states were a free and independence state, but in fact they are not a single country, as emphasized in article 2 of the constitution. ⇒but in fact they are not a single countryのareをwereに変えて、 in the declaration of independence, 13 states were a free and independence state, but in fact they were not a single country, as emphasized in article 2 of the constitution. とするだけで十分だと思います。