質問: 風邪が回復しません .....という事で、英文を書きました。いつものように細かい所を見ていただきたいのです、よろしくお願いします。 i still have the cold that i got on the last day of 2005. so yesterday i went to a doctor and now i take a medicine 3 times a day. but even now i don't feel getting well.i can not feel smell and taste. i don't have fever,so i am working,today too. i want to get well as soon as possible. i really don't like it
回答: 私だったらこんな風に直してみます。 i still have the cold that i got on the last day of 2005. so yesterday i went to a doctor and now i take(aを取る) medicine 3 times a day. but even now i don't feel (gettingを取る) well.i can not feel, smell or taste. i don't have a fever,so i am working, today too. i want to get well as soon as possible. i really don't like it もうちょっと大胆に直すとすれば・・・ i still have a cold since last year. yesterday i went to a doctor and now i'm taking medicine 3 times a day. but even now i don't feel well. i can not feel, smell or taste. i am working today again because i don't have a fever. i want to get well as soon as possible. i hate this! 特に最後の一言は原文だと「あんまり好きじゃない」程度の意味合いになるので、「うんざり」みたいな感じだったらこの方がいいかと思います。