質問: 英作文の添削お願いします。 次の英作文を添削お願いします。どんな些細なことでもかまいません。 問題:コンピュータが普及した現代社会において、人類が得たものと失ったものについて、60字以内でそれぞれ一つずつ例を挙げて説明しなさい。 (answer) the former is development of medical technology. for example, scientits use computers to discover things they don`t still know. they can diverse a new medicine to discover those things. the latter is a fall of communication ability. if you use only e-mail too much, you might feel it difficult to talk with others. thus, spread of computer have both points.
回答: 成る程、医学の進歩とコミュニケーションですね。 添削出来ませんので、別の書き方で、かなり強引ですけど、一寸具体的に(笑) computer played and will play a very important role to develop medical technology, by which scientists obtained great tool to better human life. on the other hand, we are losing own manner of personal communication with each other. for example, people often depend on sending easy “thank you e-mail” without even trying to see the other in the same building. [60 words]