質問: 英作文の添削をして下さい\(^o^)/ こんにちは! ついさきほど、住みたい国を自由に選びその理由を述べるというテーマの英作文をしました。 もし、不自然な点、明らかにおかしい点などがありましたらお教えくださいm(__)m i want to live in hawaii. when my family and i visited there 5 years ago, we got a lot of fun. i spended most of times swimming in the sea. the sea was so clear that there were many kinds of fish. i think it's very nice to be able to swim there every day. besides, all foods i ate in hawaii were very delicious. i want to eat dishes which we ate at a restaurant once again. i think living in hawaii is great. so i chose hawaii.
回答: 大変に明快でテンポの良い英文です。 細かい事を申上げれば、 i want to eat dishes which we ate at a restaurant once again. この文章ですが、ある特定のレストランのメニューであれば、 i want to eat the dishes which we ate at the restaurant once again. となり、不特定の色々なレストランのメニューであれば、 i want to eat dishes which we ate at restaurants once again. となります。 また最後の一文、so i chose hawaii. は、 that's why i chose hawaii. とされる方がよいでしょう。 ご参考まで。