質問: 英文日記を添削していただけますか(^^) 英文日記を書きました。初心者なので、特に文法的な間違いや、表現のおかしい部分などがあれば、直していただけると助かります(^^) friday, march 10, 2006 it was sunny today. i had a bad headache in this morning, so i did nothing at all what i was going to do today. there wasn't a medicine for a headache so i went out buying it and drank it in the evening. a little time later, the medicine cured my headache and i became to feel rather good. i thought that i should have drunk it earlier!!
回答: miniroseで~す♪ 先ず、とても良いのは、my dear diary とか子供っぽくしていないところですね。クマさんに話し掛ける年齢じゃあるまいし、普通の大人の表現を心得るのはすばらしいと思うわよ♪ 全体としてはとても分かりやすく書けています。細かいとこを直すより、こんな表現とか言い回しの例をアタシなりにかいてみますね。 mar 10 (fri): sunny must have had too much vino last night, as i woke with a terrible headache. it was so bad that i couldn't get to do any of the things i planned to do today. oh, and wouldn't you know it, no fuxxing tylenol! so i had to run over to a nearby supermarket to buy some analgesics. so in fact, it wasn't until the evening after i'd finally managed to down 3 tablets with a glass of warm water that i started to feel much better. silly me, i should have taken medecine earlier! こんなん、いかがでっしゃろ? そんじゃね♪