質問: 文法の指摘をおねがいします。 話を聞いて勉強するのもいいが、現場で直接体験したりして勉強した方が 必要なスキルが身に付くと英語で、 of course you can acquire skills by studying through listening to the stories,but i think its more effective to study at the real scene by experiencing many situations. でいいでしょうか。英語は初心者なので指摘が必要かと思います。 おねがいします。
回答: of course you can acquire skills [by studying] through [listening to the] stories, but i think its more effective to study at the real scene, [by] experiencing many situations. [ ] は冗長表現だと思いますのでないほうがいいと思います。 簡単にすると although learning from stories is good, you are more likely to develop necessary skills through on-the-job learning.