質問: 英文の添削をしてください。 there are several ways to keep good shape. to begin with, you need to quit smoking. needless to say, cigarette has many toxic substances which disturb you keeping good shape. next, you should eat healthy foods every meal. it will help you to be in good condition because of many vitamins. for example, vitamin c is an important one to keep one’s skin beauty. if your skin is so beautiful, it may bring your mind to be good shape! furthermore, it is good for you to get enough sleep. less sleeping is not good for your health, skin, and so on. finally, i think it is most important to exercise daily. it helps you to alleviate stress, keep your metabolism good and burn your fat. i recommend you to do it because you can do it with joy. that’s all i want to say how the way to keep good shape is. もっとお洒落な言い回しができたらなぁ、と思い質問させていただきました。文法もたくさん間違えてしまっていると思います。。。(泣) どなたか添削していただけないでしょうか。 お願いします。
回答: 長いので私も気がつくとこだけ。 goodshapeって日本語でどういう状態のことを言おうとしてますか?healthy(good)lookingの事ならいいと思いますけど、文面からちょっとちがうような。。。 あと、keepyourselfingoodshapeになります。keepgoodshapeはへんです。