質問: 英文の添削をお願いします!! 英語が非常に苦手なものです(泣)明日英語のスピーチがあるのですが、時間がないので助けてほしいです!よろしくお願いします!! 英文:i love a trip. i tell that i went to fukushima for snowboarding with a friend the other day. i got on a night coach from night of january 17 and went to the daira, adachi plateau of fukushima. when it arrived at the inn, it was about 4:00 of the morning. the feeling was excited, but i fell asleep once and i got up for 8 carrier 30 minutes of the morning and went to the slope by bus. when i arrived at the slope, one area was very clean by snow. i changed into a wear at once and went to be slippery. i did not have experience of the snowboarding so far, and this time was the first challenge. i had there was a good child to a friend, and the child teach it from the beginning. i fell down first and. however, i got possible to glide alone while i slipped a lot. when i got possible to glide, i was very glad. it was fearful to step on the lift, but got possible to get on a lift first. i want to thank a friend. i entered the hot spring at night. i have a feeling that a tired body softened by the effect of the hot spring. it was very comfortable. the supper ate sukiyaki. vegetables and meat were very delicious. i gathered in one room together and played a game while eating a cake and talked afterwards. it was the future and talked about a thing of the love, an interesting thing in various ways. it was good to be able to do a deep talk. i made a tour of fukushima on the second day. i walked the neighborhood and took a photograph with a digital camera. there were footbathing and a lake and a shinto shrine in the neighborhood of the inn. powdery snow fell, and the circumference was surrounded in the silver world and was very beautiful when i took a walk through a lake on the way. and i returned to the house on the night coach again. i became the very good memory. i want to do a lot of trips from now on. i go to the land and want to watch various things in spite of being a feeling with skin. thank you. 日本語:私は旅行が大好きです。こないだ友達と福島にスノボーに行った時の話をします。 私は1月17日の夜から夜行バスに乗り、福島の安達太良高原に行きました。宿に着いたときは朝の4時頃でした。気持はわくわくしていましたが、一旦眠りにつき、朝の8持30分に起床してバスでゲレンデに向かいました。 ゲレンデに着いたとき、辺りは一面雪でとてもきれいでした。早速ウエアに着替え、滑りに行きました。私は今までにスノボーの経験がなくて、今回が初挑戦でした。友達に上手な子がいてその子に一から教えてもらいました。最初は転んでばかりでした。しかし、たくさん滑っているうちに一人で滑れるようになりました。滑れるようになった時はとても嬉しかったです。最初はリフトに乗ることも怖かったのですが、リフトにも乗れるようになりました。私は友達に感謝したいです。 夜は温泉に入りました。疲れた体が温泉の効果によって和らいだ気がします。とても気持ち良かったです。夕飯はすきやきを食べました。野菜やお肉がとてもおいしかったです。 その後はみんなでひとつの部屋に集まり、お菓子を食べながらゲームをしたり、語ったりしました。将来のこと、恋愛のこと、面白かったことなど色々な話しをしました。深い話ができてよかったです。 二日目は福島めぐりをしました。近辺を歩いてデジカメで写真を撮りました。宿の近くには足湯や湖や神社がありました。途中、湖を散策していると、粉雪が降ってきて周りが銀世界に包まれてとても綺麗でした。 そしてまた夜行バスに乗り、家に帰りました。 とてもいい想い出になりました。私はこれからもたくさん旅をしていきたいです。その土地へ行って肌で感じながら色々なものをみていきたいです。 ありがとうございました。
回答: 前半だけ i love traveling. today, i'm going to talk about my trip to fukushima. i went to fukushima for snowboarding with my friend. i got on the night coach at night of january 17 and went to the daira, adachi plateau of fukushima. when we arrived at the inn, it was about 4:00 in the morning. although we were very excited, i fell asleep for a while. i got up at 8:30 and went to the slope by bus. when i/we arrived at the slope, all area i could see was covered by wonderful and beautiful snow. i changed into a wear quickly and started snowboading. i hadn't had any experience of snowboarding at that time. therefore it was my first challenge. my friend is very good at snowboarding, and he taught me from a to z(/from the beginning). i fell down many times. however, afterwards, i got used to it and i could glide alone. the moment i could glide, i was very glad. it was fearful to step on the lift, but it didn't take much time before i managed to get on a lift. i really want to thank my friend for helping me. のように添削しました。