質問: 自然な英語になるように、添削をお願いします。 添削をお願いします。 マレーシアに旅行に行った時はちょうどタイの国は経済成長期で、沢山のビルや建物が大通りの至るところで建設中だった。 でも一歩中道に入るとそこは別世界で、その日をやっと暮らしているような人達が木造の平屋に暮らしていた。 そのギャップは驚きとショックだった。 when i went to malaysia, it was just in the middle of an economic boom, and a lot of buidings and houses were being built all over the main streets. but as i stepped into a small path, it was a totally different world there, and i found that people who seemed to be barely making both ends meet, lived in one-story houses made of wood. i was greatly shocked by the difference.
回答: 頭のマレーシアは間違いかな? during my visit to thailand, it was in the middle of economic boom, and numerous new buildings were being built all over the main streets. however, as i stepped into side streets, i was shocked to see many poor people living in wooden shacks. ちょっと短くなりすぎちゃったかな。後ろの文をもう少し長くすると however, as i stepped into small streets, it was a whole different world. many people, who seemed to be barely making ends meet, lived in wooden shacks. i was shocked to see the economical gap in the country. どんなもんでしょうか。ちなみにわたしはタイ在住。今でも貧乏人は掘っ立て小屋に住んでます。