質問: 英文を短く(簡単に)して欲しいです。 ⇨以降を書き直しました。 arguing that greece and turkey could fall victim to subversion without support from friendly nations, truman asked congress to authorize $400-million in emergency assistance. ⇨arguing that greece and turkey could fall victim to subversion, truman asked congress to authorize $400-million in emergency assistance. この文で、特に問題ないでしょうか? 後、以下の文をもう少し短く、もしくは簡単にすることはできますか? he was launching the marshall plan to rebuild the economy of western europe, for leading the cold war against soviet and chinese communism by establishing the truman doctrine and nato, and for intervening in the korean war. よろしくお願いします。
回答: >⇨arguing that greece and turkey could fall victim to subversion, truman asked congress to authorize $400-million in emergency assistance. >この文で、特に問題ないでしょうか? ⇒はい、ほとんど問題はないと思います。 >後、以下の文をもう少し短く、もしくは簡単にすることはできますか? >he was launching the marshall plan to rebuild the economy of western europe, for leading the cold war against soviet and chinese communism by establishing the truman doctrine and nato, and for intervening in the korean war. ⇒(1) by establishing the truman doctrine and natoを削除して、 he was launching the marshall plan to rebuild the economy of western europe, for leading the cold war against soviet and chinese communism and for intervening in the korean war.とする方法が1つ。 (2) by establishing the truman doctrine and nato, and for intervening in the korean warをすべて削除して、 he was launching the marshall plan to rebuild the economy of western europe, for leading the cold war against soviet and chinese communism. とする方法もあります。 もちろん、この場合、「朝鮮戦争への介入」言及の重要性を鑑みながら省略する、しないを決めることになりますが。