I really had to struggle through this book and almost deleted it more than once
question: How did you like the story line?, context: I would love to read more from this author, if only she would use a more traditional means of writing and pay attention to editing and correct word usage.  I really had to struggle through this book and almost deleted it more than once.  If the story line had not been good, I would not have finished.  I hope to see a better presentation from this author, as I believe she has great stories to tell. 
How did you like the story line?
 I really had to struggle through this book and almost deleted it more than once .
I would love to read more from this author, if only she would use a more traditional means of writing and pay attention to editing and correct word usage.  I really had to struggle through this book and almost deleted it more than once.  If the story line had not been good, I would not have finished.  I hope to see a better presentation from this author, as I believe she has great stories to tell. 
 <hl> I really had to struggle through this book and almost deleted it more than once <hl> .
I would love to read more from this author, if only she would use a more traditional means of writing and pay attention to editing and correct word usage. <hl> I really had to struggle through this book and almost deleted it more than once <hl>. If the story line had not been good, I would not have finished. I hope to see a better presentation from this author, as I believe she has great stories to tell. 
I would love to read more from this author, if only she would use a more traditional means of writing and pay attention to editing and correct word usage. <hl> I really had to struggle through this book and almost deleted it more than once . <hl> If the story line had not been good, I would not have finished. I hope to see a better presentation from this author, as I believe she has great stories to tell.