instead of panoramic sweep , kapur gives us episodic choppiness , undermining the story 's emotional thrust . 
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(ROOT (S (PP (RB ) (IN ) (NP (JJ ) (NN ))) (, ) (NP (NNP )) (VP (VBZ ) (NP (PRP )) (NP (JJ ) (NN )) (, ) (S (VP (VBG ) (NP (NP (DT ) (NN ) (POS )) (JJ ) (NN ))))) (. )))