lacking in suspense , surprise and consistent emotional conviction 
(ROOT (S (VP (VBG lacking) (PP (IN in) (NP (NP (NN suspense)) (, ,) (NP (NN surprise)) (CC and) (NP (JJ consistent) (JJ emotional) (NN conviction)))))))
(ROOT (S (VP (VBG ) (PP (IN ) (NP (NP (NN )) (, ) (NP (NN )) (CC ) (NP (JJ ) (JJ ) (NN )))))))