too long and bogs down in a surfeit of characters and unnecessary subplots 
(ROOT (S (ADJP (RB too) (RB long)) (CC and) (VP (VBZ bogs) (PRT (RP down)) (PP (IN in) (NP (NP (DT a) (NN surfeit)) (PP (IN of) (NP (NP (NNS characters)) (CC and) (NP (JJ unnecessary) (NNS subplots)))))))))
(ROOT (S (ADJP (RB ) (RB )) (CC ) (VP (VBZ ) (PRT (RP )) (PP (IN ) (NP (NP (DT ) (NN )) (PP (IN ) (NP (NP (NNS )) (CC ) (NP (JJ ) (NNS )))))))))