کَتھ:عِمران خان/GA1

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Reviewer: Rishabhbhat (talk · contribs) ٠٤:٠٥, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
===Spelling===
* Multiple spelling errors throughout the article- mostly cases of vowel signs being omitted. e.g. عمران being used instead of عِمران.
replies: text: : اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٢٩, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: :  اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٣٧, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: ::   - If you read my comment again, "Imran Khan" was just an example. There are many more, for example: اِبتدٲئی, جوانی, انسان, کرنہٕ are more examples. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٤٢, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: :::@Rishabhbhat sure i will try to fix them. اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٥٥, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
===کِرکَٹ===
 عِمران خانَن چُھ کِرکَٹ کِس دُنیاہَس مَنٛز پَنُن ناو واریاہ تُھۆد واتنُومُت
* This seems to be from a fan's point of view. Can it be written in a more objective style?

text: اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٨:٥٦, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: : Definitely better. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٠:٤٠, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

text: :    دَستخط, 511KeV    (کتھ باتھ) 08:02, 19 مارٕچ 2022 (UTC)
===مَسلَے کشیٖر پؠٹھ ...===
Perhaps this could come under a larger section about his views and policies.

text: اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٨:٥٧, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
===کِرکَٹ 2===
The section about his cricket is far too short when compared to his career and achievements.
replies: text: :  اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٥:٠٧, ١٠ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
===سِیٲسی پییٚشہِ===
خان چھُ پَننہٕ مُلکُک ؤزیٖرِ اَعظَم۔ یَتھ حِصَس گَژھِ زیٛادٕ بۆڈ آسُن۔ 
===Discussion===
 can you please highlight more issues, which need a fix. اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٣:٠٢, ١٢ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

text: yes, the cricket stats in the infobox should be in Kashmiri and not English. And in the infobox there are still many names and words using Urdu-style spelling without vowels. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٣:٠٥, ١٢ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: :   اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٤٦, ١٤ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: ::  Now half the infobox is in English, that must be fixed. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٠:١٣, ١٤ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
thread_title: GA Review

message: * Multiple spelling errors throughout the article- mostly cases of vowel signs being omitted. e.g. عمران being used instead of عِمران.
replies: text: : اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٢٩, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: :  اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٣٧, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: ::   - If you read my comment again, "Imran Khan" was just an example. There are many more, for example: اِبتدٲئی, جوانی, انسان, کرنہٕ are more examples. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٤٢, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: :::@Rishabhbhat sure i will try to fix them. اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٥٥, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
thread_title: Spelling

message: عِمران خانَن چُھ کِرکَٹ کِس دُنیاہَس مَنٛز پَنُن ناو واریاہ تُھۆد واتنُومُت
* This seems to be from a fan's point of view. Can it be written in a more objective style?
replies: text: اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٨:٥٦, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: : Definitely better. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٠:٤٠, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)

text: :    دَستخط, 511KeV    (کتھ باتھ) 08:02, 19 مارٕچ 2022 (UTC)
thread_title: کِرکَٹ

message: Perhaps this could come under a larger section about his views and policies.
replies: text: اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٨:٥٧, ٦ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
thread_title: مَسلَے کشیٖر پؠٹھ ...

message: The section about his cricket is far too short when compared to his career and achievements.
replies: text: :  اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٥:٠٧, ١٠ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
thread_title: کِرکَٹ 2

message: خان چھُ پَننہٕ مُلکُک ؤزیٖرِ اَعظَم۔ یَتھ حِصَس گَژھِ زیٛادٕ بۆڈ آسُن۔
thread_title: سِیٲسی پییٚشہِ

message: can you please highlight more issues, which need a fix. اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٣:٠٢, ١٢ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: yes, the cricket stats in the infobox should be in Kashmiri and not English. And in the infobox there are still many names and words using Urdu-style spelling without vowels. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٣:٠٥, ١٢ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: :   اِفلاق (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ٠٦:٤٦, ١٤ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
replies: text: ::  Now half the infobox is in English, that must be fixed. Rishabhbhat (بَِحَژ صَفہٕ) ١٠:١٣, ١٤ نَوَمبَر ٢٠٢١ (UTC)
thread_title: Discussion