Pembicaraan:Serangan gedung teater Crocus City Hall 2024

message: Karena banyaknya korban jiwa dan masifnya serangan ini, menurut saya, judul artikel lebih cocok diubah menjadi "Pembataian Pusat Perbelanjaan Crocos City". Kata Balai Kota sendiri umumnya merujuk ke gedung pemerintah, bukan pusat perbelanjaan sebagaimana lokasi kejadian.
BurningHill (bicara) 23 Maret 2024 11.44 (UTC)
replies: text: @BurningHill setuju Fabi Fuu 76     23 Maret 2024 14.09 (UTC)

text: Namun yang diserang itu Crocus City Hall, gedung konser dan pertunjukan. Bukan Crocus City Mall, pusat perbelanjaan. Jika judulnya diganti “Pembataian Pusat Perbelanjaan Crocos City” tidak cocok juga, karena tidak terjadi penyerangan di sana. Jika diganti “Penyerangan Komplek Crocus City” mungkin bisa. Tapikan penyerangannya hanya di Crocus City Hall. Yah, menurut saya lebih cocok judulnya “Penyerangan Crocus City Hall”, tapi apakah Crocus City Hall-nya di terjemahkan atau tidak, dikembalikan lagi ke Wikipediawan semua. Rang Djambak (bicara) 23 Maret 2024 15.30 (UTC)
replies: text: :@BurningHill￼ di Wikipedia Inggris judul artikelnya Crocus City Hall attack kalau diterjemahkan menjadi Serangan Balai Kota Crocus sehingga judul ini sudah tepat Badak Jawa (bicara) 24 Maret 2024 02.56 (UTC)
replies: text: ::Balai kota ini kalo di Indonesia, merujuk ke gedung pemerintahan, bukan ke area publik, bung. Kalo merujuk ke kanal-kanal berita resmi Indonesia, mereka menggunakan "Gedung Konser".

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text: ::Atau apa bila memang dirasa tidak ada diksi yang representatif, menggunakan Crocus City Hall malah lebih cocok dari pada Balai Kota Crocus, karena memang bukan Balai Kota yang diserang. BurningHill (bicara) 24 Maret 2024 03.36 (UTC)
replies: text: :::Saya setuju untuk tidak diterjemahkan, karena aneh judulnya berbeda dengan gedung yang sebenarnya. Rang Djambak (bicara) 24 Maret 2024 05.02 (UTC)
replies: text: ::::@BurningHill￼ kalau begitu nama tempatnya menggunakan Crocus City Hall saja tidak apa-apa seperti yang dibilang Rang Djambak Badak Jawa (bicara) 24 Maret 2024 05.06 (UTC)
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