Pembicaraan:Hilo (produk)

message: Artikel ini walaupun ditulis dengan baik, tidak menghilangkan "status ketidak layakannya". Gimana guys, apa cuma gue yang punya perasaan begini? Atau harus dipangkas aja isinya? Serenity 02:43, 13 Februari 2008 (UTC)
Gue sih nggak keberatan kalo dipangkas. Toh yang nulis juga gue. ^^ Btw, harus bandingin artikel ini sama artikelnya Indomie. Gimana? Gue udah berusaha senetral mungkin dengan menulis semua komposisi dan isunya. Menurut gue, kita harus nulis soal produk-produk buatan dalam negeri juga? Gimana setuju? Soale, menurut gue sih, produk asli Indonesia nggak cuman Indomie ajah (gue dapat ilham ini sesudah gue baca halaman soal indomie di wikipedia Indo). Ada beberapa produk kayak Sweetener Tropicana Slim, ternyata beken sampe ke Arab sama Nigeria juga. Terus ada juga Sepatu Cibaduyut yang udah beken dari zaman engko sampe mbah. Terus ada juga... Batik Keris, terus ada juga Jonny dengan J'Co-nya (bukan Breadtalk) yang ngak kalah sama franchise luar negeri, terus ada juga Strawberrry atau Kartika Sari-nya Bandung, ada juga wikipedia Indonesia yang ditulis sama orang Indonesia, terus, dan terus.... Menurut gue, itu bukan iklan sih, tapi kebanggaan dan nasionalisme. Hehehe.... Adeuss 03:01, 13 Februari 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: : Hmm, ya, tunggu pendapat yang lain. Jujur, secara pribadi, isinya sih sudah bagus. Serenity 03:14, 13 Februari 2008 (UTC)
replies: text: ::Oke, thx anyway. Trims atas masukannya. ^^ I really appreciate it.Adeuss 03:37, 13 Februari 2008 (UTC)

text: Menurut saya sih lumayan lah, gak begitu terlihat sebagai promosi. Yaa, kualitas tulisan rintisan lah. Harus dikembangkan lagi dengan netral sih. Maglev 03:58, 13 Februari 2008 (UTC)

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message: Hello fellow editors,
I have found one or more external links on Hilo (produk) that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:
*http://www.cfsan.fda.gov/~dms/opa-col2.html is considered to be dead, however has been found to be alive. Recommend removing the dead flag from the URL.
When you have finished making the appropriate changes, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information to fix any issues with the URLs mentioned above.
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Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Melaporkan kesalahan) 3 November 2023 19.20 (UTC)
thread_title:  External links found that need fixing (November 2023)