Pembicaraan:Oganeson

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message: Mengingat sekarang banyak AP dengan tag periksa terjemahan yang diusulkan untuk dicabut (karena sudah kelamaan kena tag), ada yang mau bantu selesaikan pemeriksaan terjemahan artikel ini? HaEr48 sempat periksa bagian2 atasnya (termasuk ada kesalahan penerjemahan yang lucu sekali, "nuclear stability" jadi "nuklir stabilitas") Yang kurang tinggal dua bagian, "Perhitungan sifat atom dan fisik" dan "Prediksi senyawa". Ada yang mau membantu merampungkan?
Tag: @ @ @  Mimihitam  13 April 2019 03.14 (UTC)
replies: text: Aku pernah nyoba tapi keteteran ketika artikelnya mulai bicara soal orbital, spin, dll. Mungkin harus sepintar bung  dulu . Mudah-mudahan ada yang bisa perbaiki, tapi kalau masih belum ada, silakan dicabut status AP nya. HaEr48 (bicara) 13 April 2019 03.48 (UTC)
@ Aku mau komentar kalau ini terjemahannya parah banget!! "Standard state condensed phase" jadi "fase kental negara standar" dan "The shell structure in the nucleus" jadi "struktur kerang di inti" *tepok jidat*. Aku mau terusin sampai akhir paragraf tapi aku nggak ngerti kalimat2 ini maksudnya apaan: "Even the shell structure in the nucleus and electron cloud of oganesson is strongly impacted by relativistic effects: the valence and core electron subshells in oganesson are expected to be "smeared out" in a homogeneous Fermi gas of electrons, unlike those of the "less relativistic" radon and xenon (although there is some incipient delocalisation in radon), due to the very strong spin-orbit splitting of the 7p orbital in oganesson.  A similar effect for nucleons, particularly neutrons, is incipient in the closed-neutron-shell nucleus 302Og and is strongly in force at the hypothetical superheavy closed-shell nucleus 472164, with 164 protons and 308 neutrons." Semoga yang lain bisa membantu.  Mimihitam  13 April 2019 14.38 (UTC)
haduh haduh... kalo menerjemahkan teknis jangan pake mesin mas bro... jauh artinya
"Even the shell structure in the nucleus and electron cloud of oganesson is strongly impacted by relativistic effects: the valence and core electron subshells in oganesson are expected to be "smeared out" in a homogeneous Fermi gas of electrons, unlike those of the "less relativistic" radon and xenon (although there is some incipient delocalisation in radon), due to the very strong spin-orbit splitting of the 7p orbital in oganesson.  A similar effect for nucleons, particularly neutrons, is incipient in the closed-neutron-shell nucleus 302Og and is strongly in force at the hypothetical superheavy closed-shell nucleus 472164, with 164 protons and 308 neutrons."
"Meskipun struktur kelopak pada inti dan awan elektron oganeson sangat dipengaruhi oleh efek relativistik: subkelopak elektron utama dan valensi dalam oganeson diharapkan akan "terselimuti" oleh gas Fermi homogen dari elektron, akibat pemisahan orbit-orbit 7p yang sangat kuat dalam oganeson. Efek yang sama untuk nukleon, terutama neutron, adalah paling ringan pada kelopak neutron tertutup untuk inti Og dan sangat kuat pada inti hipotetis nukleotida tertutup superberat 472164, dengan 164 proton dan 308 neutron." Agung Karjono (bicara) 29 April 2019 04.30 (UTC)
replies: text: :@ ya makanya itu.. hebatnya lagi bisa lolos jadi artikel pilihan. Harap menjadi perhatian bagi  selaku penerjemahnya.

text: :Ngomong2  apakah artikelnya sekarang sudah bisa dihapus templat periksa terjemahannya, atau isinya masih kacau sehingga lebih baik templatnya dibiarkan dulu?  Mimihitam  29 April 2019 15.17 (UTC)
replies: text: ::@ biarkan dulu jangan dicabut dulu... saya belum sempat review dengan benar  Agung Karjono (bicara) 6 Mei 2019 07.51 (UTC)
@Agung Karjono OK, good luck  kalau misalkan sudah selesai, mungkin bisa diajukan lagi jadi AP.  Mimihitam  6 Mei 2019 07.53 (UTC)
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