Diskussion:West Pharmaceutical Services

message: Hello, I am looking to update the West Pharmaceutical Services Germany Wikipedia page on behalf of Green Room Communications, an agency that works with West (would like to explicitly state this, according to your guidelines). Below, I've listed requested edits, explanations, and links where possible for these suggested changes and for your consideration. I have broken down suggested changes according to sections. Please let me know if you have any questions or if anything else is needed - thanks so much in advance.
Information to be added or removed: 
1: In the introductory area, would it be possible to remove the first two sentences ("a company for pharmaceutical products and laboratory supplies in North Rhine-Westphalia Eschweiler with 900 employees. The pump business is a subsidiary of US West Pharmaceutical Services Inc. and the world's largest producer of elastomeric primary packaging for the pharmaceutical industry" and replace with: 
West Pharmaceutical Services Germany GmbH & Co. KG is a leading manufacturer in the design and production of technologically advanced, high quality, integrated containment and delivery systems for injectable medicines. 
West has manufacturing plants in Eschweiler and Stolberg. Eschweiler is West’s largest manufacturing plant--approximately 28.000 m2 – and includes cleanroom environments. It specializes in manufacturing of elastomer products for the pharmaceutical industry and plays a critical role in delivering billions of components for the packaging and delivery of all types of injectable medicines. It currently employs approximately 760 employees.
The Stolberg facility is approximately 12,000m2, with six cleanrooms. It specialises in highly automated metal, plastic and combination seal manufacturing, as well as cleanroom moulding and assembly. It has been in operation for 28 years servicing pharmaceutical and generics customers. The facility currently has approximately 200 employees.
West’s Kiefernweg Campus is situated close to the manufacturing plants. This is a 6,500 square meter campus comprises three office buildings, and an Innovation & Technology center of excellence for the research and development of pharmaceutical packaging components and systems for injectable medicines. It currently employs approximately 185 people in a number of global functions. 
2: For the sentence beginning with "In 1968, a participation of West Pharma Services took place and the company was renamed in Pharma-Gummi Wimmer West.", please consider updating to read "In 1968, the West Company became a 45 percent shareholder of Pharma-Gummi and the company was renamed in Pharma-Gummi Wimmer West."
3: For the sentence beginning " In 1982, the pharmaceutical metal division was founded in Vicht and moved to Stolberg in 1990." and consider updating to "In 1982, the pharmaceutical metal division was founded in Vicht and moved to the new facility Stolberg in 1990."
Explanation of issue: We'd like to provide additional information about West facilities in Germany and contextual information. 
References supporting change: All information about West Pharmaceutical Services Germany can be viewed in a fact sheet which will be updated via a separate "proposed" edits section to come shortly.
GreenRoomWest (Diskussion) 22:37, 3. Jun. 2019 (CEST)
thread_title: Some proposed changes

message: Hello - this request is to follow up regarding proposed changes requested to German West Pharmaceutical Services page. As mentioned before, I am looking to update the West Pharmaceutical Services Germany Wikipedia page on behalf of Green Room Communications, an agency that works with West. Below, I have included edits and explanations for your consideration. Of note, I would like to confirm the citation style for this page so I can format the links respectively in accordance with your guidelines. Once confirmed, I will resubmit with the references correctly linked.
Thank you in advance for all and any insight. 
Information to be added or removed: 
1: In the introductory area, would it be possible to remove the first two sentences ("a company for pharmaceutical products and laboratory supplies in North Rhine-Westphalia Eschweiler with 900 employees. The pump business is a subsidiary of US West Pharmaceutical Services Inc. and the world's largest producer of elastomeric primary packaging for the pharmaceutical industry" and replace with: 
West Pharmaceutical Services Germany GmbH & Co. KG is a leading manufacturer in the design and production of technologically advanced, high quality, integrated containment and delivery systems for injectable medicines. 
West has manufacturing plants in Eschweiler and Stolberg. Eschweiler is West’s largest manufacturing plant--approximately 28.000 m2 – and includes cleanroom environments. It specializes in manufacturing of elastomer products for the pharmaceutical industry and plays a critical role in delivering billions of components for the packaging and delivery of all types of injectable medicines. It currently employs approximately 760 employees.
The Stolberg facility is approximately 12,000m2, with six cleanrooms. It specialises in highly automated metal, plastic and combination seal manufacturing, as well as cleanroom moulding and assembly. It has been in operation for 28 years servicing pharmaceutical and generics customers. The facility currently has approximately 200 employees.
West’s Kiefernweg Campus is situated close to the manufacturing plants. This is a 6,500 square meter campus comprises three office buildings, and an Innovation & Technology center of excellence for the research and development of pharmaceutical packaging components and systems for injectable medicines. It currently employs approximately 185 people in a number of global functions. 
2: For the sentence beginning with "In 1968, a participation of West Pharma Services took place and the company was renamed in Pharma-Gummi Wimmer West.", please consider updating to read "In 1968, the West Company became a 45 percent shareholder of Pharma-Gummi and the company was renamed in Pharma-Gummi Wimmer West."
3: For the sentence beginning " In 1982, the pharmaceutical metal division was founded in Vicht and moved to Stolberg in 1990." and consider updating to "In 1982, the pharmaceutical metal division was founded in Vicht and moved to the new facility Stolberg in 1990."
Explanation of issue: We'd like to provide additional information about West facilities in Germany and contextual information. 
References supporting change: We have secondary sources to support this update; however, we want to make sure we source them correctly. Can you please confirm the citation style for this page?
GreenRoomWest (Diskussion) 20:43, 11. Jun. 2019 (CEST)
replies: text: Um was, bitte, geht es ? --PCP (Disk) 20:57, 11. Jun. 2019 (CEST)
thread_title: Some proposed changes

message: Hello - this request is a follow up regarding proposed changes requested to German West Pharmaceutical Services page. As mentioned before, I am looking to update the West Pharmaceutical Services Germany Wikipedia page on behalf of Green Room Communications, an agency that works with West. 
Below, I have included proposed changes with edits and explanations for your consideration. Since this page did not have a “References” section with a citation style, I used Citation Style A for the changes proposed. Please let me know if anything else is needed, and thank you in advance for all and any insight. 
Information to be added or removed: 
1: In the introductory area, would it be possible to remove the first two sentences ("Die West Pharmaceutical Services Deutschland GmbH & Co. KG ist ein Unternehmen für pharmazeutische Artikel und Laborzubehör im nordrhein-westfälischen Eschweiler mit über 900 Mitarbeitern. Das Unternehmen im Stadtteil Pumpe ist eine Tochtergesellschaft der US-amerikanischen West Pharmaceutical Services Inc. und der weltweit größte Hersteller von elastomeren Primärpackmitteln für die pharmazeutische Industrie)." and replace/add the following content with: 
“West Pharmaceutical Services Deutschland GmbH & Co. KG ist ein führender Hersteller in der Entwicklung und Produktion von technologisch fortschrittlichen, hochwertigen, integrierten Systemen zur Verabreichung von injizierbaren Medikamenten. West Deutschland verfügt über Produktionsstätten in Eschweiler und Stolberg
    
Standorte
Das Werk Eschweiler ist mit rund 28.000 m² das größte Produktionswerk der West-Familie und bietet zudem diverse Reinraumumgebungen. Die dortige Produktion ist spezialisiert auf die Herstellung von Elastomerprodukten für die Pharmaindustrie und spielt eine entscheidende Rolle bei der Fertigung von Milliarden von Komponenten für die Verpackung und Lieferung aller Arten von injizierbaren Arzneimitteln. Im Werk Eschweiler sind derzeit rund 760 Mitarbeiter beschäftigt. 
Das Werk in Stolberg ist ca. 12.000 m² groß. Es ist auf die hochautomatisierte Herstellung von Metall-, Kunststoff- und Kombidichtungen sowie auf die Herstellung und Montage dieser Produkte in Reinräumen spezialisiert. Das Werk Stolberg ist seit 28 Jahren in Betrieb und beliefert Kunden aus den Branchen Pharma und Generika. Es beschäftigt aktuell ca. 200 Mitarbeiter.
In der Nähe dieser beiden Produktionsstätten liegt der Kiefernweg Campus. Dies ist ein 6.500 m² großes Areal mit drei Bürogebäuden und einem Innovations- und Technologiezentrum für die Forschung und Entwicklung von pharmazeutischen Verpackungskomponenten und -systemen für injizierbare Medikamente. Derzeit beschäftigt dieser Standort rund 185 Mitarbeiter in verschiedenen globalen Funktionen.  
2: For the sentences beginning with " 1960 als Pharma-Gummi Hans Wimmer in Vicht gegründet, siedelte das Unternehmen 1966 nach Eschweiler um. 1968 erfolgte eine Beteiligung der West Pharma Services und Umbenennung in Pharma-Gummi Wimmer West. 1982 wurde die Sparte Pharma-Metal in Vicht gegründet und zog 1990 nach Stolberg um.", please consider placing this in a new section to read: updating to read:
Geschichte
1960 als Pharma-Gummi Hans Wimmer in Vicht gegründet, siedelte das Unternehmen 1966 nach Eschweiler um. 1968 erfolgte eine Beteiligung der West Pharma Services und Umbenennung in Pharma-Gummi Wimmer West. 1982 wurde die Sparte Pharma-Metal in Vicht gegründet und zog 1990 nach Stolberg um.
Explanation of issue: We'd like to provide additional information about West facilities in Germany and contextual information. 
References supporting change: Please see below and section titled “Vorschau von Einzelnachweisn”: 
1.	Opening of West’s Expanded Kiefernweg Campus, Germany (English). In: Manufacturing Chemist. (URL: https://www.manufacturingchemist.com/news/article_page/Opening_of_Wests_expanded_Kiefernweg_Campus_Germany/135880/cn143745)
2.	West Pharmaceutical Services: Neues Kompetenz-Zentrum am Kiefernweg in Eschweiler. In: Eschweiler Film Post, 15. November 2017. (URL: http://www.filmpost.de/assets/files/filmpost/Filmpost_46_17.pdf)
3.	Lu Rahman: West Opens Expanded Centre of Excellence (English). In: European Pharmaceutical Manufacturer, 11. Oktober 2017. (URL: https://www.epmmagazine.com/news/west-opens-expanded-centre-of-excellence-for-innovation-and-/)
4.	Pierre Monnier: Un Nouveau Centre D’Excellence Pour West Pharmaceutical (French). In: Emballages Magazine, 15. November 2017. 
5.	Opening of West’s Expanded Kiefernweg Campus, Germany (English). In: Manufacturing Chemist. (URL: https://www.emballagesmagazine.com/sante/un-nouveau-centre-d-excellence-pour-west-pharmaceutical.43282)
6.	 Lu Rahman: West Grows Centre of Excellence for Innovation and Technology (English). In: Medical Plastics News, 10. November 2017.  (URL: https://www.epmmagazine.com/news/west-opens-expanded-centre-of-excellence-for-innovation-and-/)
7.	West Announces Official Opening of Expanded Kiefernweg Campus (English). In: Packaging Europe, 2017-14-11. (URL: https://packagingeurope.com/west-announces-official-opening-of-expanded-kiefernweg-campus/)
8.	West Announces Official Opening of Expanded Kiefernweg Campus and New Center of Excellence for Innovation and Technology in Eschweiler, Germany (English). In: International Pharmaceutical Industry, 11. Oktober 2017. (URL: http://www.ipimediaworld.com/west-announces-official-opening-expanded-kiefernweg-campus-new-center-excellence-innovation-technology-eschweiler-germany/) 
GreenRoomWest (Diskussion) 21:32, 16. Jul. 2019 (CEST)
thread_title: Some proposed changes

message: Hello,
This request is a follow up regarding the proposed changes submitted on 16 July (above) around the German West Pharmaceutical Services page. As a reminder, I am looking to provide supported updates to the West Pharmaceutical Services Germany Wikipedia page on behalf of Green Room Communications, an agency that works with West. 
Please let us know if you can provide an update on timing for feedback or if any further steps are needed on our behalf to support these changes. Many thanks in advance for your insight. 
GreenRoomWest (Diskussion) 23:02, 24. Jul. 2019 (CEST)
thread_title: Some proposed changes