trying to follow the advice of http://www.pentadact.com/2012-03-17-gdc-talk-how-to-explain-your-game-to-an-asshole/
trying to follow the advice of http://www.pentadact.com/2012-03-17-gdc-talk-how-to-explain-your-game-to-an-asshole/
adding devlog research
rewording according to FF advice
more rewording for devlog