Pond.rookName is "Schacktorn" and should probably be used here as well.
As it's a bird, "flyg" (=fly) is probably better than "flytta" (=move). Use "osv" which is the Swedish instead of the latin etc.
Adding myself to the authors... :-)
Simplified the sentence a bit.
Replaced "gå" (=walk) with "flyga" (=fly) and simplified.
Replaced "gå" (=walk) with "flyga" (=fly) and simplified.
Replaced "modifiera" with "ändra" to simplify.
Removing "denna" as it's a bit formal.
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Removed "denna" as it's a bit formal.
Removed "denna" as it's a bit formal.
Removed "denna".
Fixed a typo "råden" => "Tråden".
Fixed typo as "krypskytte" is a nounce.
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