Processed inital annotations from @tilgovi & @dwly

https://hypothes.is/a/FCo7kGrdSeCZwq4xh0Gezw
https://hypothes.is/a/4rhKqz-hTkOdqQ-7xKn4Sg
https://hypothes.is/a/zMYzJA5UQm6SiZSUXI6Hxw