Add bio for me
Splashline: remove "real-time" in from of collaborative editing, imho it's implicit
contact page: trim down some of the text
User Experience: small tweaks to the bullet points to make them slightly shorter/clearer
"Our idea is to go further than" sentence:

- "document/data structure and organization" => I think I know what we mean here, but I'm not sure if other people will get it, so I expanded it to two features: "filesystem-like organization, structured documents,"
- reorder the features into a more logical order
- change "in CoreObject" to "in a single framework" => the key thing isn't that we have implemented all of these features, but that we've implemented them in a single framework
- add "take advantage of the overlap between these features" => IMHO this is a key idea to convey, since almost every individual part of CoreObject has been done by someone else before in isolation
- reinventing the wheel part: add "in incomplete or incompatible ways"

- delete "In existing apps, we either see poor persistence support, or reliance on proprietary systems." => THe sentence was getting too long, and "reinventing the wheel in incomplete ways" incorporates the idea of "In existing apps, we either see poor persistence support" we could add back in "reliance on proprietary systems." if you want though
Features, Framework, Download section: small tweaks
Hyperlink "OODB" to Wikipedia, Hyperlink "DVCS" to Wikipedia
Add a link to TODO.md where we say there are several imporant features missing
Hack for the "DVCS" link (red rext) to stay red, instead of becoming black like other links