Reword via Pete Resnick's review

Signed-off-by: Tom Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>
Reword via Pete Resnick's review

Signed-off-by: Tom Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>
Reword via Pete Resnick's review

Signed-off-by: Tom Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>
Reword via Pete Resnick's review

Signed-off-by: Tom Haynes <loghyr@primarydata.com>