Paper: Campaign for IT literacy through FOSS and Spoken Tutorials (Kannan Moudgalya)

This is the first draft and will be edited a little more over the next week.
Not sure about the structure - you seem to be repeating and extending the structure of the article at this point.  Can you put all this at the top of the article?  As in

1) Low-cost computing devices
2) low-tech screencast type-with-me tutorials with audio commentary in different languages
3) Large workshops using these these tutorials and fairly inexperienced teachers. 
4) students of tutorials encouraged and rewarded to make Python textbook commentaries
5) recruiting from these to creating FOSS projects to replace commercial software
6) Maybe entrepreneurs at the end of that.

Maybe it would help to have that as a outline at the beginning in order to be able to see where you are going.  But the discussion of the tablet seems out of order - maybe it should be first even if short.