FWIW, http://english.stackexchange.com/questions/154256/the-interrupting-colon-ie-a-colon-after-a-verb disagrees with the "no colon after verb" advice, but http://www.ics.uci.edu/~dramanan/teaching/ics139w_fall10/semicolons_colons.pdf agrees with the "no colon after verb advice."

I think that asking people to make style changes that improve clarity is a good idea, but also since there isn't a definitive OpenHatch style guide, perhaps the reviewer should be willing to take ownership of text changes.

I'm happy to act as the OpenHatch "copy editor" for now, if we like.

I reviewed our current text, and it seems that we follow (by accident? who knows) the "no colon after verb" rule. I reviewed it with this command:

```
$ git grep -F ':' -- '*missions*.html'
```

I'd be +1 on merging the change as-is, and having @onceuponatimeforever  another pull request on top to change this. If you (@dcarrot2) want to address it yourself, that is even better.

Either way, it might be good to start coming up with English style guide content. (I'm curious what @brittag makes of this.)