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235: Instead of consumptive use, change to freshwater withdrawals like the pie chart title

236: Add a sidebar with text between the snowpack and withdrawal figures that reads "Irrigation, public supply, and domestic freshwater withdrawals are the biggest uses of freshwater in California (1)." with the (1) linked to the Kenny paper, reference #1.

237: Instead of "Of consumptive water use, agriculture represents 74% of freshwater use (1).", should read "Agriculture represents the largest fraction of freshwater withdrawals (1)."