Peaches n Cream overhaul! Pulled the whole thing apart based on friendly reviews (Doug, Mary, Dolph) then tried to put it back together better than I started. Not sure on success. But here we go anyway.
More revisions! Including new sections, moving of section (and relatedly figure) and hopefully we're almost done.
Version of manuscipt submitted to ELE (minus annoying organization of legends, figures and box), plus the letters folder including cover letter.