Merge pull request #10 from HeavenlyArmed/master

Strick ep 1
Merge pull request #11 from HeavenlyArmed/master

Strick ep 2
Inugami Batch complete.

Released and waiting on BDMVs.
Batch QC eps2-6

ep3

0311* "us" --> "we". "us" is acceptable in informal speech (cf. swann
429.1), but i don't like the sound of it tbh :-/
1440* "err" is wrong for "er" which is chiefly BrE

ep4

0639* comma splice/added missing verb
0815* hyphenated for consistency, cf. ep3
2139* phoneme stuttering

God of the Sea left unchanged (later eps: Sea God); more of a variant
than a consistency mistake

ep5

0559* added "what", alt. "Forget you heard that"; needs an object in any
case
0644* "don't" --> "doesn't"; bit /too/ informal to be acceptable, i
think
1053* no-one --> no one
2330* edited so it agrees with the line in ep6 (which feels a bit
better)

preview lines edited to fit lines in ep6

tendency to use comma before "too"

### ep6

0033* "so might as well" --> "so I might as well"; OK for informal use,
but taking it a wee bit too far i believe; plus, omitting the subject
works better when it's the same as in the first clause
Batch QC eps6-10

ep6
2332* edited to fit ep7

ep7
0213* edited to fit ep8
0232*  more common usage
0525* more common/standard usage
0600* goes without comma usually
0746* just feels like it needs an article, they're talking about a very
specific set of signatures
0945* "Er" --> "Um"
1457 word choice?
1802* object pronoun required here
2330 edited to fit ep8
2333* edited to fit ep8

ep8
0425* sounds a bit nicer, no
1024* usually without comma
1239* phoneme stuttering
1532* agreeing with script comment person here
2330* edited to fit ep9
2330* edited to fit ep9
2333 NOT edited to fit ep9 (spirit flame line) because it the line was
shortened in the preview
2333* edited to fit ep9 (going to surface line)
2335* edited to fit ep9
2337* eptitle in preview edited to fit ep9
2337* edited to fit ep9

ep9
0001*  edited to fit ep1
0006* edited to fit ep1, edited for more consistent tone
0009* edited for more consistent tone, joined
0013* edited for tone
0036* Ooshi --> Ohshi because it's short for the Oshiohshi, just as
Shishio is short for Shioshishio two lines prior
0058* phoneme stuttering
1045* comma added
1433* preposition overkill
1732* shortened, was in dire need of shortening
2330* edited to fit ep10
2332* edited to fit ep10
2334* edited to fit ep10
2336* edited to fit ep10
2338* edited to fit ep10
CR script tends to put commas before "too"; not gonna bother with
changing them though, not that important

ep10
0237* comma splice
0257*  common usage: two words (or hyphenated) for noun, one word for
adjective
0548* killed comma b/c whole phrase is a single exclamation; slightly
edited for tone (always feels weird to me to use "god" in idioms/random
phrases when the story is about real gods)
0635* slightly changed syntax (reason: sentence adverb "soon" feels like
it should be set off with a comma in the sentence-initial position, but
that looks clunky IMHO)
0955* number of verb adjusted to agree with subject
1107* bit more descriptive and accurate now
1156* edited so we don't have two lines back to back starting with "if",
plus it kinda didn't make sense at all in the original line
1258* come on, "distributing", she's like 10yo
1318* edited b/c unsightly generitranslation
1333* comma separating phrases that go together; don't put comma between
a conjunction and the phrase it's associated with; went for a different
line anyway
1437* killed explicit relative pronoun so the now implicit pronoun can
include the "someone" previously excluded by "that"
1608* conditional backshift overkill
2150* edited because no no no no way the past tense works in english;
joined because the extra information in the next line would have made it
way too long; might warrant a second look, though
Inugami05 Typo fix.

HeavenlyArmed, you had one job. ;_;
Batch QC eps10-14

ep10
2333* edited to fit ep11
2334* edited to fit ep11 (because better and shorter in ep11)

ep11
0000* edited to fit ep10
0654* "for" feels much more natural
0924* shortened, 27 cps is brutal
0926* redundant "guys" deleted
0946* comma deleted, ungrammatical
0946 i suggest joining 0946 and 0948 because 0946 is at 25cps as is
1240 really disliking the past tense here, but it's in the japanese...
1724* comma splice
2136* flashbacks italicized, cf 0855 this same ep
2330* edited to fit ep12
2332* edited to fit ep12
2334* edited to fit ep12
2336* edited to fit ep12
2336* edited to fit ep12 (shortened)
2338* edited to fit ep12

ep12
0013* clash with japanese text overlay
0017* same; how was that missed in the broadcast QC?
0524* phoneme stuttering
0725* third conditional
1323* recieve --> receive, lol
1439* first letter in a sentence is always capitalized, contraction or
not; the apostrophe is a character, not a letter
1440* i'm sure they had more than one teacher
**  complete preview section remodeled and retimed: first time we have
something of a continuous narration (three back-to-back manaka lines
straight from ep13) so i moved tsumugu and hikari up; do feel free to
retime this though, all those fast cuts and short lines are meh to time
2332* edited to fit ep13
2333* edited to fit ep13
2334* edited to fit ep13

ep13
0638* edited to fit ep12 (the exclamation mark is better here)
1302* always capitalized as name
1445* same (insert song)
1538* same (insert song)
1546* missing article
1643* capitalized again (insert song)
1653* capitalized again; "Sea God" is the name of this specific
(lowercase) sea god; the capitalization is also consistent with all
earlier eps
1829* capitalized again; almost word for word the same line as in ep11
which also was capitalized correctly
**  preview was correct

ep14
1458* sea god capitalized b/c see ep13
1716* joined with 1719 because 1719 was way too long for its short
duration (26cps)
2108* hyphenated for consistency
Inugami BD01 changes

Some cursory fixes for now. Maybe more to come.
Merge pull request #12 from Ianunaut/master

Batch QC eps2-14
Adding airing shows.

Might as well. Adding batch changes on here will be more sensible, and
easier to track.
Inugami 01 TLC
Merge pull request #13 from escro/master

Inugami 01 TLC
Glasslip 07 Batch changes.

Yay for zero-context previews.
Glasslip 08

Initial batch commit.
Tokyo ESP 06

Initial batch commit.
Add .gitignore

Should cover most accidental additions. let me know if anything's
missing.
More filetypes for .gitignore

If there's anything else, you're probably doing it wrong at that point.
Merge pull request #3 from Fyurie/master

updating myself