Batch QC eps10-14

ep10
2333* edited to fit ep11
2334* edited to fit ep11 (because better and shorter in ep11)

ep11
0000* edited to fit ep10
0654* "for" feels much more natural
0924* shortened, 27 cps is brutal
0926* redundant "guys" deleted
0946* comma deleted, ungrammatical
0946 i suggest joining 0946 and 0948 because 0946 is at 25cps as is
1240 really disliking the past tense here, but it's in the japanese...
1724* comma splice
2136* flashbacks italicized, cf 0855 this same ep
2330* edited to fit ep12
2332* edited to fit ep12
2334* edited to fit ep12
2336* edited to fit ep12
2336* edited to fit ep12 (shortened)
2338* edited to fit ep12

ep12
0013* clash with japanese text overlay
0017* same; how was that missed in the broadcast QC?
0524* phoneme stuttering
0725* third conditional
1323* recieve --> receive, lol
1439* first letter in a sentence is always capitalized, contraction or
not; the apostrophe is a character, not a letter
1440* i'm sure they had more than one teacher
**  complete preview section remodeled and retimed: first time we have
something of a continuous narration (three back-to-back manaka lines
straight from ep13) so i moved tsumugu and hikari up; do feel free to
retime this though, all those fast cuts and short lines are meh to time
2332* edited to fit ep13
2333* edited to fit ep13
2334* edited to fit ep13

ep13
0638* edited to fit ep12 (the exclamation mark is better here)
1302* always capitalized as name
1445* same (insert song)
1538* same (insert song)
1546* missing article
1643* capitalized again (insert song)
1653* capitalized again; "Sea God" is the name of this specific
(lowercase) sea god; the capitalization is also consistent with all
earlier eps
1829* capitalized again; almost word for word the same line as in ep11
which also was capitalized correctly
**  preview was correct

ep14
1458* sea god capitalized b/c see ep13
1716* joined with 1719 because 1719 was way too long for its short
duration (26cps)
2108* hyphenated for consistency