tweak
adjust HTTP / HTTPS language
simplify
HTTPS -> TLS
"prefer secure origins" -> "communication"
remove "preserve trust" clause in summary
break up long para
adjust sections
TLS -> encryption
Talk about administrative/financial overhead of TLS
typo
Rewrite split browser / trust store para
Adjust caching section, see #10
Adjust filtering para
tweaks
drop "primarily" weasel words
simplify confidentiality para
use of 'policy' confusing
tweak
better bridge