Fix spelling
Fix casing
Avoid redundantly mentioning where this file is going.  Also point out this is not a production configuration.
Put a heading on the repo setup
Put a heading on the flocker-deploy test.
explain client and server roles better
Add a better heading for client install
Proper nouns.
Debian and Ubuntu work the same in this regard.
Add more headings.
Make the script executable.
Fix typo/grammar error.
Use unambiguous shell variable interpolation syntax.
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Fix typos
Fix typo
spelling, punctuation, and capitalization fixes