Comestible grammar feast

I made some grammar fixes to comestible descriptions. My goal was to improve the grammar while preserving the tonality of the original descriptions. Along with general sentence structure, I focused on correcting restrictive/non-restrictive clauses, punctuation before conjuctions, compound adjectives, comma splices, and fixing the irradiated fruit descriptions.
I'm not sure this comma's really necessary: I read it as salty and dried both modifying pork, not salty modifying dried-pork.  *shrug*