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Hi Mike

1. Please change the copy for the discovery block too  “Discovery Health Medical Scheme offers the widest range of health plans in the market. Find a plan that best suits you and your family's needs.”
2. Remove smoke enders
3. Please check that the copy for each block is as per the attached word doc – use only the text that is highlighted in yellow. (note that point 1 above overrides this copy deck)
4.instead of join discovery as the CTA on each block use the following

If someone clicks on a BENEFIT, the hexagon will appear explaining the benefit, with the option to click “I’m Interested”. If they click this it will then show “Thank You. Please check your report for more information”.

If someone clicks on a LEAD (Discovery Health, Vitality, card), the hexagon will appear explaining the product with the option to click ‘I’m interested”. If they click this it will then show “Thank You. Someone will be in contact with you”.

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Benon Czornij
www.bnry.co.za
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