A large part of the face-to-face seemed to be regarding clearing up your misconceptions regarding this section, but you don't seem to have incorporated that into the review draft.

For example, you need to distinguish between "the Web Animations model" and the rendering model: changing width in the web animations model will *not* change the rendering model width, i.e. what is displayed on the screen, until the next update batch.

There may still be some good feedback about clarifying the differences between these two models, and maybe even explicitly asking for them to walk through an example contrasting the rendering-model `width` property to the web animations model `width`. But as written, this section is inaccurate.