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While I appreciate your faith in my editing abilities, I would recommend at least running it though a spell-checker again because I am really bad at spelling.  There are also a few points where I felt large chunks needed rewording to be more clear, but didn't edit them, just left a note in the notes file in case you feel like it.  And some consistency things.  I am totally the kind of person who never edits anything before posting/submitting it so I totally get you not wanting to look at it again.

Anyway, an interesting read, and it was fun doing this with git.  I would especially be interested in expanding on the intellectual property / capitalism section.