@jagtalon Yes, I think the second part should be first.  I, admittedly, had not read the next section, because I thought I knew what it contained.  i was wrong. :grin:

In any case, I think you generally want the first paragraph of each section to explain and reflect the title.  So, this being "Review Process", you want to start with the "[Five Ws](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Five_Ws)" of the review process. Then move on to the specifics of how it works for their DDH pull-request... which I guess is the "One H" :grin: