One-time PR for Doc Reviews

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Hi team,

Since the material has been pushed to master, this pull request is a little unusual. Please add any comments to the docs here by the end of the day Monday, September 29, 2014. I will make changes and create a new branch and a new PR for the changes. Then, I will discard this PR. 

Please ping me if this doesn't work for you.

Thanks,
Evan
I see usages of example and your-domain throughout this page. Can we pick one and stay consistent throughout the whole doc?