New UI for discussions

ok, found out 1) the problem with snagit is that I'm using the free trial and it's not letting me save anything. used to love you snagit, but I may have to kick you to the curb...
2) to include a cursor (or "pointer" in mac-speak) in a screen capture, you have to open Applications>Utilities>Grab and select the pointer type you want to include
3) let me try a respin of the wording. I am writing for an audience who has who has actually worked in and has access to the UI, so please approach your review of whatever I come up with from that perspective.