It might be because I'm pretty tired (it's past 0200), but I'm not really sure what this is trying to tell me.  Is it trying to focus on freedom and openness?  Or is it trying to focus on mutual respect?  Or privacy?  Or being considerate?  These are all really good topics, and I think most of them have already been hammered at much more effectively within this.

Thoughts: we could (?) expound line 9 to focus more on being considerate.  We've definitely already touched on open culture and sharing (lines 5 and 7).  What it means to be free, to be egalitarian, is hit on pretty strongly in line 1.  Privacy and consideration lend themselves particularly well to each other.  I like the idea of "bring in da noise, bring in da funk" being a closing line to our values statement, because that's precisely the kind of whimsical, bring-it-on attitude I like to see.  How about replacing this line with something specifically targeting privacy, respect, and consideration of others, and then placing it immediately before the current line 9?