cuts the intro, and reworks the Sandi Metz quote.
Just a little a tweaking to strengthen the beginning

This post looks great!  I would say it communicates one idea really well.  The blog itself complies with SRP :)
This example is great. Great hook and great return to the hook at the end.  Well done.  Let's get this thing published!
Merge pull request #3 from dougbradbury/patch-2

Just a little a tweaking to strengthen the beginning
Merge pull request #4 from elizabethengelman/second_draft

Second draft