Create terminalvelocity

Using the, "Save the Cat" model for beats, I have just written a trashy cliche blockbuster action movie. For fun! It might be easier to work through some of the process on something to which I'm not attached? Anyway- it's bare bones and there are holes everywhere. Help me clarify and plug them! It'll be fun!

Protagonist is a private jet pilot for the secret service trying to leave LA to get back to DC in time for NYE
Supporting Character is a TSA Agent