Mcgarry edits - Intro

Agreed.

On 11/06/2014 01:21 PM, Katy Huff wrote:
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> In fundamentals/intro.tex:
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> > @@ -19,15 +19,15 @@ \section{Introduction}
> >  chemical, industrial, and political phenomena. Nuclear fuel cycle simulators
> >  therefore couple complex systems such as nuclear process physics,
> >  facility deployment, and material routing. However, most nuclear fuel cycle
> > -simulators have not incorporated modern insights in simulation science and
> > +simulators have not incorporated modern insights into simulation science and
>
> maybe the right correction is "from." We're not trying to put fuel 
> cycle simulator insights into simulation science. Rather, we're trying 
> to put simulation science insights into a fuel cycle simulator.
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