Batch QC eps2-6

ep3

0311* "us" --> "we". "us" is acceptable in informal speech (cf. swann
429.1), but i don't like the sound of it tbh :-/
1440* "err" is wrong for "er" which is chiefly BrE

ep4

0639* comma splice/added missing verb
0815* hyphenated for consistency, cf. ep3
2139* phoneme stuttering

God of the Sea left unchanged (later eps: Sea God); more of a variant
than a consistency mistake

ep5

0559* added "what", alt. "Forget you heard that"; needs an object in any
case
0644* "don't" --> "doesn't"; bit /too/ informal to be acceptable, i
think
1053* no-one --> no one
2330* edited so it agrees with the line in ep6 (which feels a bit
better)

preview lines edited to fit lines in ep6

tendency to use comma before "too"

### ep6

0033* "so might as well" --> "so I might as well"; OK for informal use,
but taking it a wee bit too far i believe; plus, omitting the subject
works better when it's the same as in the first clause
Batch QC eps6-10

ep6
2332* edited to fit ep7

ep7
0213* edited to fit ep8
0232*  more common usage
0525* more common/standard usage
0600* goes without comma usually
0746* just feels like it needs an article, they're talking about a very
specific set of signatures
0945* "Er" --> "Um"
1457 word choice?
1802* object pronoun required here
2330 edited to fit ep8
2333* edited to fit ep8

ep8
0425* sounds a bit nicer, no
1024* usually without comma
1239* phoneme stuttering
1532* agreeing with script comment person here
2330* edited to fit ep9
2330* edited to fit ep9
2333 NOT edited to fit ep9 (spirit flame line) because it the line was
shortened in the preview
2333* edited to fit ep9 (going to surface line)
2335* edited to fit ep9
2337* eptitle in preview edited to fit ep9
2337* edited to fit ep9

ep9
0001*  edited to fit ep1
0006* edited to fit ep1, edited for more consistent tone
0009* edited for more consistent tone, joined
0013* edited for tone
0036* Ooshi --> Ohshi because it's short for the Oshiohshi, just as
Shishio is short for Shioshishio two lines prior
0058* phoneme stuttering
1045* comma added
1433* preposition overkill
1732* shortened, was in dire need of shortening
2330* edited to fit ep10
2332* edited to fit ep10
2334* edited to fit ep10
2336* edited to fit ep10
2338* edited to fit ep10
CR script tends to put commas before "too"; not gonna bother with
changing them though, not that important

ep10
0237* comma splice
0257*  common usage: two words (or hyphenated) for noun, one word for
adjective
0548* killed comma b/c whole phrase is a single exclamation; slightly
edited for tone (always feels weird to me to use "god" in idioms/random
phrases when the story is about real gods)
0635* slightly changed syntax (reason: sentence adverb "soon" feels like
it should be set off with a comma in the sentence-initial position, but
that looks clunky IMHO)
0955* number of verb adjusted to agree with subject
1107* bit more descriptive and accurate now
1156* edited so we don't have two lines back to back starting with "if",
plus it kinda didn't make sense at all in the original line
1258* come on, "distributing", she's like 10yo
1318* edited b/c unsightly generitranslation
1333* comma separating phrases that go together; don't put comma between
a conjunction and the phrase it's associated with; went for a different
line anyway
1437* killed explicit relative pronoun so the now implicit pronoun can
include the "someone" previously excluded by "that"
1608* conditional backshift overkill
2150* edited because no no no no way the past tense works in english;
joined because the extra information in the next line would have made it
way too long; might warrant a second look, though
Batch QC eps10-14

ep10
2333* edited to fit ep11
2334* edited to fit ep11 (because better and shorter in ep11)

ep11
0000* edited to fit ep10
0654* "for" feels much more natural
0924* shortened, 27 cps is brutal
0926* redundant "guys" deleted
0946* comma deleted, ungrammatical
0946 i suggest joining 0946 and 0948 because 0946 is at 25cps as is
1240 really disliking the past tense here, but it's in the japanese...
1724* comma splice
2136* flashbacks italicized, cf 0855 this same ep
2330* edited to fit ep12
2332* edited to fit ep12
2334* edited to fit ep12
2336* edited to fit ep12
2336* edited to fit ep12 (shortened)
2338* edited to fit ep12

ep12
0013* clash with japanese text overlay
0017* same; how was that missed in the broadcast QC?
0524* phoneme stuttering
0725* third conditional
1323* recieve --> receive, lol
1439* first letter in a sentence is always capitalized, contraction or
not; the apostrophe is a character, not a letter
1440* i'm sure they had more than one teacher
**  complete preview section remodeled and retimed: first time we have
something of a continuous narration (three back-to-back manaka lines
straight from ep13) so i moved tsumugu and hikari up; do feel free to
retime this though, all those fast cuts and short lines are meh to time
2332* edited to fit ep13
2333* edited to fit ep13
2334* edited to fit ep13

ep13
0638* edited to fit ep12 (the exclamation mark is better here)
1302* always capitalized as name
1445* same (insert song)
1538* same (insert song)
1546* missing article
1643* capitalized again (insert song)
1653* capitalized again; "Sea God" is the name of this specific
(lowercase) sea god; the capitalization is also consistent with all
earlier eps
1829* capitalized again; almost word for word the same line as in ep11
which also was capitalized correctly
**  preview was correct

ep14
1458* sea god capitalized b/c see ep13
1716* joined with 1719 because 1719 was way too long for its short
duration (26cps)
2108* hyphenated for consistency
Merge pull request #12 from Ianunaut/master

Batch QC eps2-14