ED: to-be-stable
ED: drop the-the in certain cases
ED: rfc2119-must
ED: rfc2119-must-not
ED: rfc2119-may
ED: rfc2119-should
ED: focus: to-which
ED: any -> all/a
ED: stage->state
ED: both as -> as
ED: if -> whether
ED: if -> when
ED: B does something, A does something else, C also does something like A -- but not like B
ED: emphasis on "way"
ED: avoid be-cause
ED: sink-space
ED: avoid refactor from-sink(and)
ED: omit awkward on
ED: resolution=X by Y; width and height... X and Y, respectively
ED: period before </p> -- incomplete