silly nitpicky grammar changes

As per your DM, my comments as a pull request. Feel free to ignore, delete, or implement only some, I don't mind.

I moved some of your language from the [passive voice to active voice](https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/539/02/), as this is said to "make writing stronger".

I also added a few transitions, just to make it a little more of a story, which it seemed you were going for.

Finally, I added a heading for "the solution", as after staring a problem down for a while (as developers will have before they find your post), it's nice to have the solution available immediately. This preserves your style and post while still allowing the anxious dev just to grab it.

Overall: great post! I'm sure it'll be super handy for me one day.