Slightly more active voice
active voice
Splitting sentence for punchiness.
Tightening up sentence
Summation of the quoted materials to underline menaing
Splitting sentences for punch.
Call out that this site uses a single typeface
Massage sentences for rythm and clarity
A possible rewrite of this thought
Expand to put in keyboard thought
Added point
Massage of quote discussion
Massage of quote discussion
Guillemets!
Dash discussion edit
any/every