Comestible grammar feast

I made some grammar fixes to comestible descriptions. My goal was to improve the grammar while preserving the tonality of the original descriptions. Along with general sentence structure, I focused on correcting restrictive/non-restrictive clauses, punctuation before conjuctions, compound adjectives, comma splices, and fixing the irradiated fruit descriptions.
Likewise confident that this is a song/jingle of some sort.  Rivet's much more familiar with that than I am.  I'd leave it as was.