Added some material on the sympathy discussion
Added some subheadings
Reorder some paragraphs
Drafted some paragraphs of commentary
Rewrote introduction
Reorganising sections, and drafting content
Rephrased introduction, more explicit about the plan
Drafted material on perception
Sense of presence point
Further drafting of material, now on sympathy
More drafting of sympathy reflection section
Added further material to reflection sympathy
Merge branch 'development'
Further drafting of ethics section
Merge branch 'development'